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Demi by Tedbiker

Author's Description:
Returning home one cold evening on his motorbike, Pete finds a teenage girl huddled by his garage...
Size: 29 KB ( ~ 5,499 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction

Review by Turo69   [other reviews by Turo69]

Reviewed: 2017-02-16


Thank you Tedbiker for another great story. I've read several over the years and have yet to find one that I didn't like. My only issue is that this poor man never learned English. He tosses in words from England and expects us poor mortals to know what he means. I am just teasing and many times I'll just Google words he uses going from English to American ;-).

Demi is a delight, don't look for a stroke story here. His carefully crafted yarns are pleasing to mind and being a fan of Royal Enfield's is a major plus in my book.

Thanks again from a fan.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10