Many things can be found in the dry ranges of South Texas. One of them is work. Good work. Sometimes, though, going through the motions of the job, one doesn't know what manner of strangeness can come into one's life, turning routine into a little bit of an adventure. Meet Dave and what he finds hidden behind the seat of his work truck, a Guatemalan waif. She's looking for her aunt. Or something.
Size: 703 KB ( ~ 133,310 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, Lesbian, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Incest, Brother, Sister, Group Sex, Polygamy/Polyamory, White Male, Hispanic Female, First, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Petting, Slow, Geeks
Some say that oyster50's stories are all the same. And, to some degree, they're right: they're all very, very good.
And there are some common themes in his stories: teenage girl who decides that an older man is "the one," and proceeds to win him over. This story does share that: it's about a Guatemalan girl who's coming to the U.S. for a better life.
But this story is different from his others, in that other lovers become part of the relationship. It's new territory for an oyster50 story.
The story is well-written. There's a very good and believable plot. The characters seem real, and what happens to them is, well, life. oyster50 makes it all very engaging. My only complaint is that the chapters come too far between.
Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10