When by RichardGerald


Description: She wants his proposal and can't understand why the nerd is hesitating. After all she is a cheerleader.
Size: 21 KB ( ~ 3,982 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Fiction, Humor, Cheating, School

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: 2016-05-20


When, is the first word of the story in 'RichardGerald's' story 'When'.

In the tale we meet Patty-Ann a very loose (as in immoral) head cheerleader. We don't even learn the narrator's name for about sixteen paragraphs, which is Greg by the way. Anyway Patty-Ann has chosen Greg to be her husband but Greg does not want to play her game.

The story revolves around tales of the romance of Greg and the sluttish behaviour of Patty-Ann.

This is a two part story The first deals with the way Patty-Ann acts towards Greg and her disrespect of his feelings. You need to read both stories to fully understand how RichardGerald resolved the issues that developed in the stories. 'When' is a very good tale even if you get pissed at Greg in the end of the first story, read the second one to get a better idea of what love really means.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7