Mayhem in a Pill by Shinerdrinker

Description: After a visit from someone he believes he can trust, Tim Murphy's life changes in ways he never could have imagined.
Size: 785 KB ( ~ 148,859 words)
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, mt/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Celebrity, Sports, Science Fiction, Time Travel, DoOver, First, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Slow, School, Military

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: 2015-11-29

I have been following this story since Shinerdrinker first started submitting it on 3/26/2015.

Starting out in the future then jumping back to the present I got very confused until I paid closer attention to the story. The story makes sense now. So don't quit reading it in frustration, Shrinerdrinker is slowly tying everything together with two stories of the same basic guy. With the future and present and future and present evolving into the present/future, kinda confusing to say the least.

But this is an excellent story and I strongly recommend that you give it a chance. Be patient the author publishes at his own pace, it just getting better and better.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10