The Storm by Ptarmigan


Description: A man driven to succeed finally discovers what he'd lost and retires to a remote island in the North Pacific where he lives by himself. A winter storm hits and after the storm, the man discovers an unexpected item on the beach.
Size: 204 KB ( ~ 38,684 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, First, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Sex Toys, Slow

Review by Turo69   [other reviews by Turo69]

Reviewed: 2016-11-23


A second time through for "The Storm". I read it when it first was published and I'm glad that I reread it as it was still enjoyable. I'll now have to do some more research on these islands and their inhabitants.

It's not a difficult read, no major plot twists or turns and, while some parts are a bit predictable, all in all, it's a nice story. There are a few holes in the story that might puzzle the most careful readers out there but nothing so major as to spoil the flow. The sex is there but it's not a stroke story, just as an integral part of the plot.

Likeable characters and a nice tale. I'll read more from this author and, hopefully, will enjoy the other stories posted here as well.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9