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Author's Description:
Danny teaches junior high. As he starts another school year, he connects with Maja's mom. Mom is beautiful and she's going through a tough time. Danny helps out and a relationship develops. This is a simple romance. The action is minor but essential to the story.
Size: 281 KB (55,215 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction

Review by Vitruvian Manuel   [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]

Reviewed:


This is a good-time romance story, with a kid at the heart of the relationship between Mom and the kid's teacher, with just enough action to balance the mushy stuff.

The Bad:

Shorter than I prefer. Action/adventure bits are fairly predictable.

The Good:

The sex is decent. The romance heavily involves the child, as t should. The romance parts are fun and a bit sappy at times. The protagonist reminds me of me, who happens to be a wonderful guy.

The Last Call:

It's worth the time it takes to read it. Give it a shot -- it's relatively short.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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