Dana by oyster50


Description: Poor Ed. Thinks he's settled, single. Has his toys. LIfe could be better, but for now... His elderly neighbor has a problem. Her granddaughter's in jail and guess who gets to pick up the fourteen year old daughter? That would be Dana, who sees Ed as the friend she's been waiting for.
Size: 522 KB ( ~ 98,987 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Fiction, First, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Cream Pie, Slow

Review by barron of ideas   [other reviews by barron of ideas]

Reviewed: 2016-04-23


Oyster50 has done it again. There are similarities with his other stories. Younger girl, older guy meet, fall in love and get married. It may be that the author doesn't need to find endings for his stories, he just adds the protagonists to his Community story and they march on to glory. I recommend the story, and all the others, unless you really, really don't like romance and engineering.

The plot is serviceable with a limited number of surprises, at least for his frequent readers. I will give it a seven, which is the equivalent of a B. The Technical quality is fine, I will give it a nine. There might have been something I missed and I don't give tens, most of the time. Maybe one a month, if its a good month. Nine is an A plus. Appeal to reviewer is an eight, an A. If I hadn't read his other stories and it were more of a surprise I might give it a nine. The story has romance, sex and a happy ending. For a sequel or what happens next you get to read Community Two. I enjoyed the story, I think you will too.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8