Who Are You? by Barneyr


Description: An ex-ranger and black ops leader is involved in an auto accident, but it's a total mystery as to who and why. Follow his adventures as he learns more about his accident and finds love in the strangest manner.
Size: 260 KB ( ~ 49,304 words)
Type: Mystery
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Fiction, Violent, Military

Review by Lugh   [other reviews by Lugh]

Reviewed: 2014-11-22


First-rate. Realistic enough that I winced and clutched my foot when one of the Bad Guys had his toe broken -- I remember that happening to me.

Not all that much sex, and the sex was loving.

There were some military details, and I do mean details, where I suspended disbelief. I'm not sure that I ever quite worked out the relationships among the Bad Guys, or how the protagonist was able to bring in active-duty SOF. It's also unclear who blew up the bad guys in Mexico. These are reasons I didn't give a 10 on plot or technical quality.

The pure writing is superb.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10