This story has lots of sex, mostly with young girls, and has a theme almost any airline traveler can agree with, airlines are a rip-off scheme to provide the worst service for the most money of any travel method you can think of. There is a sort of dreamlike feel for lots of the story. The hero/narrator is pretty sure he is in some kind of drugged hallucination or dream during much of the action. I kept reading to try to figure out what was going on, and I am not sure I understand it even having completed the story. I guess I am going to have to read the sequel. We haven't even met the villain of story yet, although we have met a lot of his relatives. This may not sound like a recommendation for you to read the story but do it anyway. I don't recall reading anything like it elsewhere on SOL and you owe it to yourself to see if you like it.
I am going to give the plot a nine, if I can't figure it out it has plenty of twists and turns. Once again, the action is so fast I didn't see any technical problems, and I guess I will give it a ten. The alternative is reading the story over again to look for errors and I am too confused to do that if I don't have to. I rated this a "good" story and that's an eight. Did I mention the sequel is in progress?