Aftermath by CJ


Description: Oh this is a story about a girl who grows up in a post apocalyptic world and has one thing that she wants to do get bred.
Size: 12 KB ( ~ 2,276 words)
Type: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Post Apocalypse, First, Oral Sex, Pregnancy

Review by Belinda LaPage   [other reviews by Belinda LaPage]

Reviewed: 2014-09-08


It's been 10 years since the plague wiped out most of humanity and left the earth a lawless wasteland, inhabited by a few immune survivers; now almost all in protective breeding pairs, trying to resurrect the human race.

Sara was just 4 at the outbreak and now at 14, she feels the inescapable pull of nature calling on her to breed, although she has only the vaguest notion of what it entails.

Can the lone man in this remote house provide what her young, burgeoning body so desperately needs?

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CJ has crafted quite a clever little plot device to deliver us a sexually naïve 14yo, who in some ways behaves even younger.

If you are squeamish about underage fantasy then move along, but fans of sexual awakenings will find some appeal in this short story.

Sara is tiny, naïve and sweet; and Martin is BIG (and probably tall too, the story doesn't say). The combination is a sexy, breathless tight fit fantasy that is very gentle on the pedo-meter (I'm not talking about walking).

PLOT: 9 (Great) A good device to get a naïve young teen her first time.

TECHNICAL: 5 (Good+Bad) The composition of the build up was weak, punctuation and grammar were poor throughout. It really let the story down.

APPEAL TO ME: 7 (Good) Notwithstanding the technical quality, I enjoyed this. The sex was well described and better edited than the rest. I especially liked the female POV.

VERDICT: 7 overall. This could be an 8 with a simple edit, or a 9 if the composition of the non-sex component was addressed. Worth a read for fans of First Time / Awakenings stories.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 5 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7