This was cathartic to write, mainly in narrative form, with some poetic licence thrown in for interest. Unlike me, he is likable and you have to sympathise, even if you don’t agree with his attitudes and point’s of view. Some historic timing is out to allow the story to flow.
This is my rewritten,augmented and edited story --Torn lives--. I have to thank two people. My editor Johnny Galt who with his constant prodding, questions and suggestions made that the story changed for the better and I'm also in debt to fellow author CPBaudelaire who the 03/14/12 wrote a number of suggestions to improve the story in his comment to Torn Lives. To both of them many thanks. Fermpera
This is the first of a series of stories that I am going to do based on various songs, mostly ones I suspect most readers have never heard. This one is based of an old standard, and involves two young Jewish kids in love with each other in the arranged-marriage ghetto of the Lower East Side. Their marriages have been arranged, but not to each other. How will they cope?
A prifysgol Story Sian had invited her twin cousins down to Cardiff for the weekend; they were both virgins, but wanted to go to University that autumn with some sexual experience, and Sian had nominated Julie and I to give it to them!
A Story in the Naked In School Universe
Some girls spend a lifetime growing up, but for fifteen year old Samantha Madeiros it all seems to happen at once as she tries to deal with her stripper mother, her best friend's growing infatuation, and the romantic attentions of the girl next door. On top of all that, Redmond High is starting a new program called Naked in School, and that might turn out to be one problem too many for a girl to handle.
Divorced, Robby goes to work for an older business woman. Over time he is urged to reconcile with the woman he divorced. Pressure is applied to reconcile by his mother, the new woman he married and by the the boy that caused the divorce in the first place. This story has an extreme mature theme with reconciliation at the end of it. Be aware.
As homage to Lubrican - and by popular demand, here is my continuation of "The Cheerleader Blues" - a great story that originally ended much too soon...