A Halloween 2022 Contest Entry
The girlfriends of some rich guys are invited to an event in a very exclusive club, without knowing that instead of being amused, they are the ones who are going to be the fun.
Brad is humiliated and dominated by his wife and her friends; having recently had his chauvinistic world turned round, his wife goes a step further and chooses a stud, as do her friends. Brad tastes total defeat, and many other things as he is reduced to a worthless oral slave. Middle aged housewives can be so cruel.
After graduation, Sam grows apart from his two best friends, Rachel and Nathan. Now they're about to get married, and Rachel invites him to visit. He'd always been fascinated with Rachel, unable to deny her anything, and she means to deal with their unresolved issues.
Rex is dominated by his Mother-in-Law, while his wife takes a lover; he enjoys being dominated, but her methods of humiliation increase, and the services of other dominant women are utilised in ensuring Rex is broken completely, in preparation for his becoming her permanent slave.
The original version of this story drew some of the lowest scores and harshest comments I've ever received. Instead of deleting the original and writing it off, I decided to do a rewrite. If you read the first story, please read this one and let me know if it's any better, or if the whole concept just sucks rocks.