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Reviews by Steve Ogden
About Steve Ogden:
So I have strong likes and dislikes. My major like is a story that is consistent to itself. I want to see characters grow and act in a way that makes sense. The worm doesn't become a dragon overnight!

My major dislike is lack of plot. I accept that a stroke story is just that but I'd like to see a reason for A to get it on with B. If the reason makes sense then so much the better.

I can live with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, if the story is good then I won't really notice them. I want to be entertained, to feel for the people involved and want to get to the end of the story.

I have squicks and if a story touches one I won't review it, I can't be impartial in those circumstances so it's not fair. Other than that there are stories here which are as good as ones I've paid good money to buy and my goal as a reviewer is to point out some of those but also some of the stories that could be in that class if they were worked on.

Be well

Steve
  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Homebodies Al Steiner 10 10 10
The Future of Miss Powers Lazlo Zalezac 10 9 10
A. King and His Queen Lazlo Zalezac 9 9 9
The Grim Reaper rlfj 10 9 10
Unforgettable Weeks Jay Cantrell 10 9 10
Lifeline Jay Cantrell 10 9 10
The Rise of Jade Force Lazlo Zalezac 9 10 9
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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