USMC vet Sam is working in his yard one day when an errant soccer ball hits him in the side of the head, sending him face first into a flower bed and possibly into an unexpected love. An inauspicious beginning to be sure, but then the best things in life often come when we least expect them. And will Sam and Jessie's relationship survive not only emotional scars from the past, but also a killer tornado?
Size: 271 KB (51,884 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Humor, Military, Oral Sex
Review by bill9900 [other reviews by bill9900]
Reviewed:
This is a romantic story that hits all the notes - love, sorrow, fear, exhilaration, remembrance and satisfaction.
The writing and particularly the dialogue between the two main characters are very strong points for the story. As you finish Chapter 1 and move into Chapter 2 and beyond, the story picks up speed. By the end, I found that I had totally enjoyed it and wanted to look at some of OldSarge69's other stories. In this one, I especially enjoyed the blond jokes and aspersions cast about the University of Georgia.
Anyway, I highly recommend this story if you like a good adult romance with a touch of all-in-good-fun snarkiness between the characters. Even better, I didn't notice any typos or grammar issues that can get in the way of a good read.
The author has done a great job and I was well entertained while reading the five chapters.
Happy reading!
