Writer Mick: Blog

Hi All

I wanted to lay out the timeline for a few things before the final chapter of "The Passion of the O'Dells" posted on Sunday.

The first stories featuring this branch of the O'Dell Universe was "I'll See You When I See You", followed by "Expect Me When You See Me". I got so may requests for stories of Grams O'Dell that I decided to write something about her.

But then I had to write the story of where she came from and then I had to go back and write where that part of the family came from. That too me to "The Fortune of the O'Dells". Before that story, I figured that O'Dells were just a normal family of farmers in Nebraska.

I decided that the family would change with their involvement in the Civil War. That story took the reader from the Civil War through the establishment of the family fortune and featured the wonderful character, "Opal Anne O'Dell".

The next story was the current one, "The Passion of the O'Dells" and takes us to the end of World War 2 and the first huge change in the O'Dell family structure. I'm trying really hard to not give up any spoilers here!

About half-way through writing that book, I decided that at some point in the future I was going to combine and rewrite the first two stories that started all this and make it the last book in the saga.

Now to the problem. I'm trying to draw to an inside straight! I have a beginning and an ending and half of a middle. So I'm getting a bit stuck with the third book. It is supposed to take us through the Korean and Vietnam wars and through a portion of the Afghanistan conflict.

My problem? I'm trying to keep some very overt political feelings out of the story. I have rewritten the three chapters dealing with Korea three times! So I need a little guidance before I go and do w hat I want to do anyway.

I know what I want to do, but I'm just trying to prepare myself for the host of low scores it's going to generate. I'm not a score hog, but it has been wonderful to see the score climb and to hear from the readers.

My feeling is that Opal Anne O'Dell was a strong person who believed in going along and leaving everyone alone. The only times she and Paul took up arms was when they were attacked. Bullys set them off. Threats to their friends are treated like threats to themselves.

As of right now, I am working on the third, and last, book of "The Strawberry Patch" series. I've locked up on The O'Dells for a bit. It might not be until the late Fall that the first chapters of the new O'Dell book see the light of day.

Give me your thoughts, if you would. I have appreciated your feelings and thoughts, yes even the ones that said "You Suck!"

Thanks

Mick

Hi All

There was something about the finish of Chapter 18 that just didn't feel right. I couldn't put a finger on it, but reader Catf1sh did!

This is why I enjoy getting notes from the folks who read my efforts. I have fixed the error on my master and I've posted the corrected chapter. It was nothing horrible, just one of those things that make me crazier than I usually am.

Two chapters to go in Book 2: The Passion of the O'Dells.

Again, thank you so much for reading and caring enough to let me know your thoughts. I DO appreciate it.

Mick

Hi All

Chapter 18 was rewritten and then not posted! I just put it back up and it is now correct. If you loaded it just as it was posted, please download it again

Sorry

Mick

Hi All

There was really constructive comments about "Affair of Choice". They pointed out some weaknesses (none said anything about the many and assorted spelling errors). I decided to go back a read it again and found all the spelling errors and fixed them and then I added another thousand or so words.

The story moves better, fills in the holes that were pointed out and doesn't seem to end in a rush. Please take a few minutes and read it again and see if it deserves a better score.

Also, see if I added more errors! You can always comment on those.

Mick

Hi All

My muse smacked me in the head and kept me awake. I had to get up and put this story down on electrons before she would let me got to sleep.

It's after 3AM here in Oklahoma. I'm going to bed. By the time this posts, I'll hopefully still be asleep.

Oh, the story is called "Affair of Choice".

Good night

Mick