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Hi All

Some additional comments by you readers caused me to fix a few points in chapters 10 & 11. These things made the story factually correct.

The fact that readers feel free to let me know how to make the stories better without the "You Suck!" part is wonderful.

Thank you all for reading and thank you for comments.

I also wanted to thank a reader, Murphygirl1, for her readership. Way, way back in the dark ages of January 1, 2017 when I posted the first chapter of my first story "Mick and Keri", Murphygirl1 was my first commenter. Her notes, while short and to the point, have been a constant of positive support.

Thank you Murphygirl1.

And thank you readers. Moving forward I hope to mess up less and write more better (that was for my dear grammar friends)

Mick

Hi All

It took some time but starting tomorrow (Sunday) "On Guard" will be up to speed and the new chapter will post.

The rewrite has received very good comments so it appears that I have not screwed the pooch.

Per usual, if you catch errors send them to me and I'll fix them. It never fails that no matter how many eyes see something, the speel check fairies and the grammar goblins always manage to sneak in something!

Mick

Hi All

The rewritten Chapter 10 of On Guard was posted this AM. It had an error. There is a letter with the sender and the sendee deleted.

I'm still getting used to the little controls for turning on and off text enhancements. Now the letter is correct. Sorry about that.

The last rewritten chapter will post tomorrow morning and then we'll resume posting the original chapters again every Sunday.

Mick

Mick

Hi All

Chapter 9's rewrite posted today and this begins the real changes in the story that were caused by an awful lot of negative comments. These chapters should square away the story line and lead on to the end.

The next new chapter will post on Sunday Feb 6 and then on every Sunday morning to the end of the story.

Thanks to all of you for reading and for all of you for the comments, yes even the "You suck!" ones.

I hope the stories have had enough of an effect on you that you'll vote for my stories in the Clitorides. Yes that was blatant vote pandering.

Mick

Hi All

Well chapters 6 & 7 of "On Guard" are up and chapter 8 posts Sunday morning. I ope the changes in direction have been noticed because it was after chapters 9, 10 and 11 that I started getting the really negative comments.

In order to change those issues I had to go back and rewrite or redirect the story. So the real changes should start to be seen in a few days.

As a sidebar, I see that I've been nominated for a few Clitorides. Maybe this year I'll finish higher than 2nd to DFL! "The Fortune of the O'Dells" is nominated for the Best Erotic Western. "The Passion of the O'Dells" is nominated for Best Long Erotic Story" and for "Best Romantic Story".

Thank you in advance for your votes and remember to support my good friend Michael Loucks for the several stories and the individual "Author of the Year". I think he should get Author of the Year just for the shear volume of quality writing.

"Have a great Saturday night and Sunday morning and Go Chiefs!

Mick