Writer Mick: Blog

Hi All

Chapter 9's rewrite posted today and this begins the real changes in the story that were caused by an awful lot of negative comments. These chapters should square away the story line and lead on to the end.

The next new chapter will post on Sunday Feb 6 and then on every Sunday morning to the end of the story.

Thanks to all of you for reading and for all of you for the comments, yes even the "You suck!" ones.

I hope the stories have had enough of an effect on you that you'll vote for my stories in the Clitorides. Yes that was blatant vote pandering.

Mick

Hi All

Well chapters 6 & 7 of "On Guard" are up and chapter 8 posts Sunday morning. I ope the changes in direction have been noticed because it was after chapters 9, 10 and 11 that I started getting the really negative comments.

In order to change those issues I had to go back and rewrite or redirect the story. So the real changes should start to be seen in a few days.

As a sidebar, I see that I've been nominated for a few Clitorides. Maybe this year I'll finish higher than 2nd to DFL! "The Fortune of the O'Dells" is nominated for the Best Erotic Western. "The Passion of the O'Dells" is nominated for Best Long Erotic Story" and for "Best Romantic Story".

Thank you in advance for your votes and remember to support my good friend Michael Loucks for the several stories and the individual "Author of the Year". I think he should get Author of the Year just for the shear volume of quality writing.

"Have a great Saturday night and Sunday morning and Go Chiefs!

Mick

Hi All

Well the complaints that the rewritten chapters were not showing up seems to have been fixed. I'm glad.

Chapter 6 will post on Friday Morning. The subtle changes and references that lead on to other things later continue.

Have a great weekend and Go Chiefs!

Mick

Hi All

I've gotten several emails regarding rewritten chapters not being on SOL. In each case I've gone to SOL and gone to my homepage and in each case the new chapter is posted.

In some cases the change is dramatic, in some cases the changes have been subtle. Some changes have been to bring later used names into the picture early. In some cases the change has been to set a philosophy for the later story.

They are there. I have no knowledge of the inner workings of SOL and how Laz conducts his business. Every time someone says something of mine is not available, I go look at it's always there.

I have no answer to those wonderful readers who have left me a note.

Rewritten and edited Chapter 4 will post on Wednesday morning after 8AM Eastern Time in the US. Perhaps that's the problem. I don't know where the readers live.

Mick

Hi All

Just a reminder that Chapter 3 of the reinvigorated "On Guard" will post in the morning.

A few have found some poor English and sent me corrections. I fix those as soon as I see them.

Thank you so much!

I'm writing Chapter 22 right now.

Mick