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John the Genius Book 3 Public Eye has been updated! The same effort to hunt down those missed typos from the 'professional edit' generated more text. it nearly doubled in size again as I dug into the real world mechanics of the Colorado Chess Championship, the Euro Motors event correcting a plot defect there and then doing the same for Heartland and TWP media. The original book was 23k words, the first update and expansion was 49k, the hopefully final was 93k.
If you bought the book on BookApy/zbookstore then I encourage you to download it again. If you haven't yet, then please do so. It remains at the novella price of $2.99.
I was going thru book 1 and discovered missed typos. Then I discovered a bunch more in book 2 and three. I think it got passed thru an automated editing system, cause they were pretty weird typos.
So I updated the books. Of course I couldn't help editing and adding more stuff, so each of book 1 and 2 now have another few thousand words, and some simplified explanations. It's gotten even better, which is amazing cause I was so happy with how much I had already added. Both are now in the 45k word range, compared to the original 20 & 25k range.
I'm now working on book 3. Book 4 will be next.
Many readers thought book 5, interviews and interventions was the weakest. Updating that was a huge project. There many short paragraphs have become multiple chapters. It's so big now that I'm splitting the book into two volumes. Still working on names. I'm thinking bodhivista and media war. The Dali lama scene is hugely expanded after the Kobe quake, and the iriian jaya events along with the Pacific economic zone are much more detailed and larger events now.
Anyway, if you bought the books, the updated versions are there for another download and read.
Wow, book 4 is up on the bookstore.
Omniscient Book 4 is a huge expansion. The original was 25,000 words, this rewritten version is over 68,000!
I put a lot of work into it, and then got professional editing help, and wow, what a difference.
I'm also loving the work I did on the covers. That initial book cover is based on a childhood photo of me, digitally aged and altered. All the other photos afterwards are similarly aged and dressed based off that initial picture. Really cool tech, so special thanks to Google for making that available.
So book 4 is up, same price as the others $2.99! Go and enjoy!
Will I've sent it in to be put on Bookapy and ZBookStore.
Book 3 of John the genius was quite the fun book, when it came to expanding the content, it went from around 28k words to just under 50k, nearly double. And I almost expanded it further, but couldn't get the scene with George Lucas quite right. Kept wanting to complain about how ugly his beard was, but since he had no chin it was good he had it! I think too much post episode 1 hate kept coming thru even after all these years.
I'll add the purchase link to the original once it becomes available. If you want to check out the cover image it's been added to the original Public Eye.
As mentioned before, this has been a long running project, and will hopefully keep chugging away as I get the various parts back from the editor.
The ultimate goal is a massive combined omnibus edition of omniscient.
Thanks for reading.
PT
I'm happy to announce that book 2 of John the genius is now up on the bookstore. Again it's been expanded, updated and thoroughly edited.
This particular project isn't getting posted back to sol, the original version is staying up. It was the series that consistently broke 8.0 in reader score, so the original isn't terrible. The new version though is better.
For now it's a zbookstore and Bookapy exclusive. The omnibus version once all the pieces are finished probably won't be.
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