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Since I have stopped (or at least slowed down) producing new stories I have been reading and rewriting many of the stories I have written to preserve them for posterity. I am doing that with Furnished Room, having completed half of the series. In rewriting the chapter that I list here as Burqa Beauty; I want to run it by you and get some opinions.
Thanks for any input, Peter
To my readers:
I have come to the point where my muse has left me. Ideas are no longer coming for both new stories and stories I have not finished. Therefore it is time to call it quits. Thank you very much for the support you have given me over the years.
Sadly,
Peter Duncan
I have just reread the entire story, made some changes in these chapters to make it more professional and read better, and posted Chapter 24. I hope you enjoy them.
Peter.
Abby goes to London. Chapter 24 is devoted to Abby having sex with Ryan in the mirrored bedroom. Then, on the flight home she worries if she should or could tell her husband about what went on.
I am at the stage where I am no longer working on new stories but am rereading and reworking all my material trying to make sure they are as good as I can make them. I have reworked this story and am pleased by how much better it reads for me.
I thank all of my readers and future readers for looking at my work.
Kindely,
Peter
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