Peter Duncan: Blog

I have decided to make a substory of the chapters of "The Pastor's Wife" involving Elliot Grinnel can be done more prominently on its own. In re-reading and reworking the original story as I always do, I found the chapters involving Elliot Grinnel had gotten lost in the body of the larger story, and am reworking it into a tale of its own.

Abby comes home from England and attacks Gary in the car on the way home then wears him out in bed that night while wondering how she is going to tell him about what went on while she was abroad...if she should tell him at all.

Please disregard the posting of this story. I have already posted it under another name (College Reunion). I have deleted it.

I apologize.

Peter Duncan

Abby returns from London charged with the sexual experiences she had there with Arthur, Colette, and Ryan. Before she left she told Gary what a disappointing lover he was. When she came back intent on ravishing her husband into becoming a sexually charged lover he surprised her with the knowledge he had gained from his visits to the sexual counselor

In line with all of my stories, I have re-read, re-written, and re-edited this story. Upon reading it I was embarrassed by how loosely it had originally been put together. I apologize and frankly am surprised that my readers rated it so much higher than I should have expected. I'm happy with the rewrite in which I have made chapters shorter, thus five chapters instead of three. There is no new content worth mentioning. But the story reads much better. At the end, I have chosen to add a bit of Toby Wakefield history in order to bring the Toby Wakefield Universe to a close.

Thank you very much for your patience and loyal readership.

Kindest regards, Peter Duncan