Peter Duncan: Blog

When I started this story the words began to flow like no other story I have written. My intention was to make it chapter 8 in Penguins' Preference. But as I continued it made sense to me at the time to make it a stand alone story connected to the Penguins'...universe. Had I added it to "Penguins..." I wouldn't have been able to see it's impacted grade-wise. Initially it is tracking at a much higher level than the previous chapter of "Penguins'..." Also I was much more diligent in editing and proofing. With the new Windows program there is a "Conflicts" applilcation that highlights grammar which makes editing much easier. I was able to write it, edit and proof it much more easily and with three readings polish the story. I'm interested in your comments, both positive and negative and will respond to most recommendations.

Thank you for your continued support of my writing

Peter Duncan

I received an email from one of my readers who pointed out and error. I referred to the Airline as BOAC. He said that BOAC stopped flying in 1974 and became British Airlines. I made the change in the six chapters where the error the wrong information occurred.

Thanks for the good eye and standing up for correct information.

Peter