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I have reread, reorganized and condensed long chapters in to shorter chapters.
I continue to get solid support for this story which I had marked completed. The voting wasn't what I hoped it would be so I reread the chapters and found them sorely lacking. I have rewritten and reedited the existing chapters to my satsifaction and hope you will approve of its content. I plan on moving it forward with another chapter soon. Thank you for you continued support.
Peter
I continue to get solid support for this story which I had marked completed. The voting wasn't what I hoped it would be so I reread the chapters and found them sorely lacking. I have rewritten and reedited the existing chapters to my satsifaction and hope you will approve of its content. I plan on moving it forward with another chapter soon. Thank you for you continued support.
Peter
Chapter 17 finally has Arthur and Abby getting together in Colette's flat.
I have been advised by one of my readers that Chapters 1 and 2 have both been posted as one chapter. I have made the correction and reposted Chapter 1. I apologize for the mix-up,
Peter
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