Peter Duncan: Blog

I have completely reworked the series, correcting errors, condensing chapters trying to make the story more easily readable. There are four more chapters (14-17) but still tell the same story. I I originally wrote this story 17 years ago but want to leave in as perfect condition as I can. For those of you who have read it it is the same with shorter chapters. For new readers it is better written and will be easier to read. Thank you all for your support.

Peter Duncan

Arthur's mother flies to London Heathrow airport--She meets Colette who is working the flight. Arthur meets his mother at the airport and they discuss the panties.

Chapter 15 is up.

Abby gives her husband Arthur an unltimatum that she wants to dominate her. She meets Colette and boards the plane to London.

Chapter 14 is up. Colette calls Arthur's mother Abby Chadwick, about coming to London for Thanksgiving. Abby dwells on fantasies she has been having about her son for the last four years.

I am continually amazed by how well this story has been received. It has quickly moved to number four over series I have written years ago, now approaching 37,000 downloads and included in 423 libraries. Apparently the subject matter is appealing. It also comes when I have had years to work on my writing skills. While I don't have an editor any longer I have found that if I am meticulous in my own rereading and editing as I go the results become more flawless (please if you find any errors let me know). Presently I reread the story I am working on three times on a working edit before I submit. Additionally I have recently reread every chapter previously submitted, reedited as I read and resubmitted. Thank you all for the comments you have made, including criticism of my writing. I love doing this and have found a story that seems to flow quite easily.

thanks again,

Peter