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For those of you who've read more than one of my stories, I'm sure you've noticed that I've tried different writing techniques and styles - alongside some of my whacked out plots. For example, my first story, The Times..., was written in the first person, all the rest in third.
In Monica, I've switched names from Monica to Monty and back to indicate changes in persona. One reader wrote to say that the switch in names didn't bother, but the switch in pronouns did. As I wrote, I wrestled with this and changed several times. If anyone has thoughts on this, I'd like to know them. It is doubtful that I would use this again, but who knows?
I've enjoyed the feedback on this one. My thanks to those of you who write.
Chapter 6 is in the queue for tomorrow. I hadn't realized that this is a short chapter, but Chapter 7 will make up for that - I promise.
Miriam and Robyn are back on Earth waiting until they can return to Chaos as Companions to their Hero, Pēteris. In their usual routines, they are each confronted with Chaos-type problems. They are no longer quite Earth-type civilized and handle them in Chaos-type style.
Thank you for your votes. Monica is now my 2nd highest rated story on SOL
The next chapter is in the queue.
Monty and Charles take the two rescued ladies home. Daddy isn't happy with their feedback.
Your notes and votes are very much appreciated. I think you folks like this one.
In probably the best Rose Bowl ever, my Bulldogs beat the Sooners.
So, as soon as I post this, I'll kick chapter 4 of Monica ahead in the queue. If our moderators are still up and working, you should see it shortly.
Sic 'em Dawgs
Chapter 3 is in the queue for tonight.
Are there no end to bad guys and women to be rescued?
Can Monica have sex with a real man?
Read and let me know...
Happy 2018.
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