Omachuck: Blog

First half is over and Georgia scored again.

Dawgs 13 - Tide 0. Have another chapter.

Monica finally meets Pēteris and has an idea.

Are you a turtle? Bet your sweet ass I am!

Enjoy.

Georgia Scores again.

Here's another chapter.

Pēteris meets up with Maggie and little Sara. There's happiness.

Georgia scored!

Here's Chapter 8.

Pēteris and his Companions return to Chaos - Beavis the town where they first appeared. Their welcome is not exactly warm.

Chapter 7 is in the queue and is due for delivery by Sunday the 7th. But like babies, it may pop out sooner.

Pēteris and his Companions finally return to Crossroads. They find Moira, twins, and Damsels, a Hero Greeter (what's wrong?) and what else?

Soo-Min is still hot for Pēteris.

An adventure is selected. Will Pēteris choose Monica Mechanic for his Damsel? Who is Trudi Masseuse?

All in good time. Stay tuned.

For those of you who've read more than one of my stories, I'm sure you've noticed that I've tried different writing techniques and styles - alongside some of my whacked out plots. For example, my first story, The Times..., was written in the first person, all the rest in third.

In Monica, I've switched names from Monica to Monty and back to indicate changes in persona. One reader wrote to say that the switch in names didn't bother, but the switch in pronouns did. As I wrote, I wrestled with this and changed several times. If anyone has thoughts on this, I'd like to know them. It is doubtful that I would use this again, but who knows?

I've enjoyed the feedback on this one. My thanks to those of you who write.