Kat Sakaro: Blog

I need feedback. Between Chapter 1 and chapter 10 which chapter do you think is the best and why. I'm looking for constructive answers only, if you're going to dump on me and say none and not leave a constructive answer then move along.

I know I'm not the best writer, hell, I don't even consider myself to be a novice. I'm just writing what I like for you to enjoy.

Sorry for no updates this month, but health issues, and editing issues abound. Also, a severe lack of direction at the start of CH 18. I think I have one, but will see where it goes.

Going to be some information that the reader should know about. The entire merging of minds and how the powers work in theory, then the dance and the after party might be it's own chapter, see how that goes.

Feed back is always appreciated, just PM me.

I've got chapter 18 of ANLoL started (A New Lease on Life. going to abbreviate it from now on). Got a strong breakfast scene started before the chaos of the day of the dance.

I think CH 19 will be the day after, and bit more character development of the children including Danny and Paula. Chapter 20 might be Halloween, unless something sparks in between day after and Halloween.

A little health update, I'm starting to get chest pains again. Unfortunately I can't tell if it's gallstones or actual heart issues or just Fibromyalgia pains. If it keeps up I will go to the hospital, and I've been so good, it's been almost a month since my last visit, in a few days, if not already past a month.

So, there's an update on ANLoL and me.

Happy Reading,
Kat

So, I managed to get chapter 17 done. It's in editing mode now. I'll give it a once over, then give it to my editor if I can get him back again.

Well, I just looked at my calendar for October and oy do I have a lot going on. My birthday for one, turning 38, and I have a bunch of doctors visits, for pain management, and finally gallbladder removal Nov 2nd.

So, I think I'll take October off from posting, because writing and typing will be kind of hard to do consistently. So maybe I can finish a few chapters to put into my queue and have a bigger buffer by end of October. Sorry for the bad news but October is health month for me.