Kat Sakaro: Blog

I'm throwing y'all the bone I have. Chapter 17. it's totally different than what I've posted. Chapter 17 will arrive on Halloween, and it's not even a spooky story.

Well I'm sorry to say I haven't made much progress with Chapter 18. I seem to have lost my editor that I had contact with so I need to edit my story my self again. Right now I'm trying to balance how much detail is too much and what is needed and what is not.

Chapter 18 is all the talk and prep-work for the girls (and boys) for the Dance. Chapter 19 will be the dance, and Chapter 20, I think I will do profiles on the new warriors that were introduced in Ch 15-16. Get their background, how they feel about it all, and some current world events that are going on especially the forced recruitment act.

So rambling on some more. I still have the battle to balance detail. How much is too much? is it enough? is it too much? is it just right? but for now, stuck on preparing for the dance.

Advice, words of wisdom, encouragement, something would help.

I need feedback. Between Chapter 1 and chapter 10 which chapter do you think is the best and why. I'm looking for constructive answers only, if you're going to dump on me and say none and not leave a constructive answer then move along.

I know I'm not the best writer, hell, I don't even consider myself to be a novice. I'm just writing what I like for you to enjoy.

Sorry for no updates this month, but health issues, and editing issues abound. Also, a severe lack of direction at the start of CH 18. I think I have one, but will see where it goes.

Going to be some information that the reader should know about. The entire merging of minds and how the powers work in theory, then the dance and the after party might be it's own chapter, see how that goes.

Feed back is always appreciated, just PM me.

I've got chapter 18 of ANLoL started (A New Lease on Life. going to abbreviate it from now on). Got a strong breakfast scene started before the chaos of the day of the dance.

I think CH 19 will be the day after, and bit more character development of the children including Danny and Paula. Chapter 20 might be Halloween, unless something sparks in between day after and Halloween.

A little health update, I'm starting to get chest pains again. Unfortunately I can't tell if it's gallstones or actual heart issues or just Fibromyalgia pains. If it keeps up I will go to the hospital, and I've been so good, it's been almost a month since my last visit, in a few days, if not already past a month.

So, there's an update on ANLoL and me.

Happy Reading,
Kat