Kat Sakaro: Blog

I've finally got chapter 18 finished! I didn't know how to end the chapter at first and thought it was just go on and on, but I got my ending and I'm happy with it. Now it needs a looking over for the obvious flaws, and continuity, as well as spelling and grammar.

So chapter 18 is the lead up to the dance and that'll be chapter 19. I'm not sure if I want a conflict in this chapter or not. I've noticed a theme happening, get togethers and events seem to have some kind of conflict. Dying, getting shot, assaults etc. Let me know if it's too much but, we will just have to wait and see what happens, even I don't know what will happen until it's written. I feel like a lot of authors have that issue.

So chapter 18 will be posted, soon*, I hope by end of month if not early next.

Happy new year everyone. I'm still alive, I'm still working ANLoL. Sadly it's painfully slow, a word here, a sentence there. My mental issues are keeping me from recalling my story so I'm having to keep reading it over and over and it slows me down.

Also my ADHD has decided that I'm going to hyperfocus on Pokémon Scarlet since it released. It's the first pokemon game that I've fully 100% in, and by that I mean, beat the elite four (and the other 2 missions) and 100% my pokedex.

As for ANLoL, I am slowly getting thru chapter 18 and actually about to close it out. Chapter 19 I know what I want, it's just how well can I write it? if it's too short then I'll just merge it with 18. There's a 99% chance of sex though so maybe it'll be just a stroke chapter lol.

In closing, once again. Happy New Year Y'all!

Just giving you an update, that I'm alive and well still. While I'm trying to work on ANLoL, a new story popped into my head and I got a quick 2 chapters down, they are short and in need of a heavy looking over before I even consider releasing them to the public.

So yeah, so far the working title of the new story is "Tonight's the Night" it's the chronicle of a Master and sub, from their first meeting, to finally being collared and his forever (we can hope). Lots of sex and D/s scenes are probably going to be there, probably not as explicit as those in ANLoL though. This is just a quick story, a few chapters at most, highlighting milestones and key scenes.

I hope the people in America had a good turkey day on Thursday (it's the day after as of posting) And now the carnage known as Black Friday has come into full swing.

Good luck and Gods speed. Which ever one(s) you believe in.

Well it seems I'm stuck on Ch 18 in ANLoL. I'm trying to slog thru but I'm stuck on the characters getting their hair done for the Fall Dance. I know what the girls will be doing, but what about the guys? I'm at a lost honestly. It's been too long since my last school Semi-formal/formal dances to recall what I did.

I may just take a break and start up a revision of the first few chapters, now that I'm back to writing again, or at least want to write. Or maybe a new short story separate from ANLoL or maybe a profile/history/origin of some of the characters. Let me know what you think, my DMs are always open, would you all like to see profiles and origins of some characters?

Chapter 18 is picking up speed, but I keep getting distracted by kitties, and titties, and kitties with titties. So, Ch 18 is forming nicely, Ch 19 I have in my head, it's the dance.

However I do have a slight dilemma that I'm preparing for, Ch 18 and 19 could be too small to be a full chapter, and if combined could be too large of a chapter. What would be preferred? One large chapter, or 2 smaller ones? let me know.

I have also CH 20 in my mind as well. It's going to be the personal reflections of the newer characters, and kind of a introduction to them.

Please, feedback is important. Let me know what the masses would like from my story. Critical feedback and info. Not just "Paula x Jake fuk plz k thx bye!" actual critical thinking on this. I know it's a lot to ask in the day and age for critical feedback.