ghostwritten: Blog

Hello readers,

Off the top, I'd like to thank everyone for the strong support for the return of The Girl at the Motel Pool. It was nice to see a story succeed again and the review scores have slowly been going up on it, which is also nice.

I took a lot of feedback from readers over the past few months since the first couple of chapters were posted. I tried to incorporate many of them into these three chapters that will be released. People wanted more detail on the characters, personalities, and just the world around them. I hope I can provide some of that in these next couple weeks.

Coming up this weekend, we have the second chapter of Teacher's Pet. I asked for feedback on this story too and a number of you have reached out to provide their thoughts. I want to thank everyone who messaged and gave me their opinions.

One of the main bits of feedback was the title sucks. It sets a tone of a teacher using a student, which this story is not. I'll try to have a new title up before the next chapter goes live. If you have any suggestions, please let me know.

The blurb outline also isn't very good, so I'll have to write a new one of those too. They are challenging to write when you don't want to spoil too much.

The last thing is the story might be too slow. Not a lot happens in the first chapter which is a year. The story does ramp up as time goes one. Chapter 2 is also a year, but after that it spreads out more. I wanted a more realistic, slowly building, relationship which probably makes for a boring read. I am sorry about that. I had some good suggestions to fix that in the future, so hopefully I don't turn you off from my stories in the future.

Anyway, thank you for reading this. If you have any constructive feedback or something you'd like to see from me, feel free to reach out. I try to respond when I can.

Thanks again,

-ghostwritten

Hello readers,

Well... that was a start I didn't expect for Teacher's Pet. For some reason no one is reading it, which isn't good. The review scores aren't great either but I expected that early on. The first couple of chapters are setting things up. Maybe I should stay away from the 'slow, narrative' stories. If anyone reading this has any suggestions as to what's going on here, I'd love to hear it.

Coming up midweek, hell may have frozen over on this one. A desperate phone call leads Jack back to the Vista Lodge Motel in the return of The Girl at the Motel Pool. This will be a 3-part conclusion to the tale I started a while ago. People asked, so I hope they enjoy it.

For the weekend, it's Teacher's Pet chapter 2. It is sophomore year and new relationships develop. Hopefully a few more people find this story over the coming weeks. Whatever happens, I'm proud of this story and it was a joy to write.

Thank you readers,
-ghostwritten

Hello readers,

Back for a short midweek update. Just put out a new A Girl's Guide to Cookie Dough on the ghostwritten after dark account. Views have been decent for it being over there, which is nice. I wish I could update that story more than once a month, but I just don't have the free time. 2 more chapters are scheduled though through the rest of this year so feel free to make suggestions on what you'd like to see going forward.

Coming up this weekend, we have the first chapter of Teacher's Pet (Don't Stand So Close to Me). This will be a 10-chapter story that will every weekend till the end of the year. It is a slower, narrative focused story so there will be less sex than you are usually used to from me.

The story follows music teacher Gordon and student Kelsey as they navigate an unusual relationship through the years. Situations and scenarios attempt to push them together and also tear them apart, while social pressures loom overhead.

My goal is to have a more grounded story with this one. I might not get everything right, but I'm hoping it is a step forward for my writing.

I'd like to thank everyone who's supported me up to this point with scores, comments, messages, and even just reading the stories. I'd have stopped a while ago if it wasn't for all the great feedback, positive and negative.

Thank you everyone,
-ghostwritten

Hello readers,

That was a fun week, it was nice to have two stories posted in one week again. So, as posted in the end tag, Sister's Servant is on hiatus for the next little while. It will be back to in November, but I think those will be the last chapters for it. It is unfortunate but the views just aren't there for more chapters. I still have to figure out how to conclude it, but I'll figure it out this week.

On to this week, first off, on the midweek story we have another chapter of A Girl's Guide to Cookie Dough on the ghostwritten after dark account. Blake gets to spend some quality time with his new friend, Trixie and finds out more about her.
I'm going to change the story to 'in progress' going forward to let people know more will be coming. I'll try another one done for November. I'm enjoying writing this as a change of pace and I hope people still enjoy reading it.

For the weekend, we have a new story starting. Teacher's Pet (Don't Stand So Close to Me), is my new slow, narrative focused story about a student/teacher relationship. The second part of the title is a reference to a song of the same name by The Police, which was the inspiration.
I've been working on this for months now and I hope everyone enjoys it or at least gives it a chance. I've learned a lot since writing The Creek, and tried to improve my style. I'll write more about it for a midweek update blog in a few days.

That's it for now, I am really excited (and nervous) to finally put out the first chapter of Teacher's Pet. If you haven't already, give A Girl's Guide a chance if you like light BDSM and bondage.

Thank you for reading my nonsense,
-ghostwritten

Hello readers,

As I mentioned in the previous blog, I was going to post a story this week for the Halloween Contest. Since I'd never been involved in a writing contest before, I didn't know how it worked and I got it all wrong. You submit the story to a separate place and then they post them all on Oct. 31st, for people to judge.

Well, now I know for next time and will be better prepared. But for this year, I'm just going to post it normally to my account. I'd rather give you all something fun to read right now. It won't win any prizes but it was fun to write and I hope you enjoy it. As always, let me know what you thought.

So, enjoy Masquerade Charade (whenever it actually posts on the site).
-ghostwritten