DeYaKen: Blog

I'd like to take the opportunity to wish all my readers, past, present and future, a Merry Christmas. Sorry it has been so long since my last offering. I am waiting for someone to edit it. In fact there are two in the queue with another one soon to join them.

Perhaps Santa will sen me someone.

Well folks I've tried to explore another scenario of emotional upheaval. I hope you like it. Penn Lady has edited it for me and offered her critique which made the story better.

It was originally intended to tell the story from both viewpoints and some of the feedback says that Caroline's viewpoint is lacking. Is there any interest in writing the story again from her point of view.

After nearly a yearit looks likeJuicy has decided to call it quits. She seems to have too much going on in real life to find time for editing. Really can't blame her for that can we?

I am now in need of a new friend who will read my stories, give me an objective opinion and point out my errors.

Prefer woman from U.K. or woman who can edit U.K. English

Don't knock it was my first attempt to write a story setin the USA. I tried to use the language of that country and was prepared for feedback telling me what I had got wrong.

Does no feedback mean I got it all right or simply that it was so bad that it didn't merit a comment?

There is a new stroke story posted. A bit of a departure for me. It was written in response to a request from a member on another site. She wanted to be featured in an erotic story. I hope it works.