DeYaKen: Blog

I rattled this one off while waiting for Guardian Angel to be edited. It tells the tale of two people whose lives are connected. This story was as far as I intended to take things with this couple. The couple have nagged at me as I finished the story. "Hey!" they keep saying,"We're good people who've had a bad deal. We deserve better than this" What to do about it? That is the question.

As my readers will know Sex forms only a small part of most of my stories. I have written some stories where the main focus was sex but in the main they focus on relationships.

A while ago someone wrote to me with some very positive feedback. In this response they mentioned that they thought the story would have lost nothing if I'd left out the explicit sex.

I would genuinely like to know if my readers think that stories like Sugar Daddy and Guardian Angel would be as well received without the explicit sex scenes.

If you have a view on this, I'd be interested to hear from you.

Thank You, Thank You, Thank You

You have been so kind with your comments and scores for Guardian Angel. 172 tens is an amazing experience. I apologise for the few paragraphs where person and tenses go a little haywire. That was my fault not my editor.

I hope to provide you all with more entertaining reads in the future. Thank you all so much for your appreciation.

Yes I've finally posted it and it should be up in a couple of hours.

A bit of background

I was looking at the amateur pic thread on Literotica's forum and found some pictures of a beautiful mature woman named Vanessa. The inspiring photograph showed her emerging from the Australian surf wearing a white one piece bathing costume. I thought "Wow I'd like to write a story that I could illustrate with pictures of this woman." Unfortunately I was unable to convince Vanessa and her husband that it would be a good idea.

I started writing the story anyway hoping that when they saw it they might change their mind. Originally it would have covered just the subject matter from Chapter 3. However, in my head the characters started to live and demanded to tell their own stories. The result is what you see. I hope you like it. All feedback is appreciated.

If there are people out there waiting for the next story, I can only apologise. I have found an editor but she has limited time, so it's taking a while. The story is written we are just trying to smooth out the rough edges.