Buzios: Blog

Thank you very much for your comments and ratings. For me - and for all writers - feedback is the main motivation the readers can give us.

The story goes on and there will be love and fun, and problems, suspense and distrust. But as they say "Love conquers all ....."

I hope that you continue to enjoy it.

Some readers may have realized that I have posted this story before. It is a long one and received favorable comments as very good. English is not my mother tongue, and I always thought that is was a bit stilted showing my German origin.

I asked for help and a fellow writer was kind enough to give me some advice. I re-read everything, revised the text, added some action, and principally, made it more readable.

It is a story of four people meeting, falling deeply in love, having problems and resolving them, building a business, getting friends, and having a lot of fun. It is a fantasy: women are beautiful but not easy, sex is abundant, lots of money helps, and at the end, they live happily ever after …..

As every writer, I'm eager to get a comment. If it's bad, I think about it and will try to improve; if it's good, I enjoy it and take it as an incentive to continue.

I hope that you like it and if you are ever in need of help, contact Crumbly Writer; I am grateful for his recommendations.