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The happy times are over for James and his women when a dear friend is ill and needs support, and the potential new President forces James to resign from IBM. What will life now bring for him?
Enjoy it.
I have seen in the ratings you have given me, that one chapter - FAL Part 2 - was not as well received as the others. I spent the last two days and re-wrote it. Please look at it the changed version and let me know what you think. Thanks for reading my stories, and enjoy them.
Life in a happy mariage can be very rewarding, especially when you can share it with friends. James knows how to handle the women in his life (at least most of the time), there is success in business and at Christmas, presents will be exchanged. A visit to the Hunter Valley fills Eileen's wine cellar. There is a problem, however, at the New Years Party, but James uses his Krav Maga and resolves it.
This is the fourth part of my A Fantasy about Love series.
I'm sorry for the delay in publishing this chapter, but my editors had other priorities and I did this on my own. Enjoy it and let me know what you thought.
There was a comment that stories had to have a beginning that did not start immediately after the finish of the previous one. I changed the first paragraph of Part 3 accordingly.
I am still learning!
The chapters of this story have been messed up when they were submitted. They were posted as Part 1, then somehow Part 3 became Part 2, and Part Part 2 became Part 3.
I was told by the Webmaster that this has been corrected.
I apologize for the confusion and can only hope that reading these stories, you can still enjoy them.
I would like to ask the readers for help.
The original story was about 1000 pages and well received. I was advised that breaking the story into smaller parts would make it more readable. There is now the question whether reading a long story or various smaller ones would be better. Can you help me?
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