Buzios: Blog

My editors released the next chapter. I hope you enjoy it.

And please don't forget to rate you opinion!

Regards and stay safe

The first story has been submitted and I hope it will please you.

After the second part has been published, I will withdraw the original story.

Unfortunately, I depend on my editors to liberate their input - this means that the rate how the followings parts will be available, depends on them.

In any case, have fun.

Years ago I submitted a long story about people in love, and it was received well.
I went back to the story and after researching what I could do to improve it, I re-wrote and re-formatted it, and finally got two editors to look at it.
I believe that it is better now, easily more readable and with a bit less of my German background.
I hope you enjoy reading the new version - I enjoyed revising it.
Have fun!

I've just posted the final chapters of A Fantasy of Love. It has gone now as far as I could get it - re-reading and re-writing it several times.
It leads a young man to meet and love a beautiful and affectionate young woman, makes him discover another woman who wants to join them, and finally opens the door for a woman seeking love and care, to give and to receive. He is successful in his career, but has a serious setback when a newly appointed president of the comany he works in, forces him to choose another path. This leads to a complete change into a new business and he becomes successful there also. His life is not always easy, but intelligence, persistence, a good portion of humor, and the support of his ladies gets him to the top.
It is a long story and partly dialogue-driven, but I hope that you'll enjoy it (and give me some feed-back).

I've read some stories the last few weeks and was surprised how well they were written. That made me think about my own story and I wondered whether it could be improved. So I went back, re-read it, and found a little slip in the time line here, a word not used right there, and a misplaced image stopping the flow of the story. I went back once more, tried again, and re-posted it.
So you'll find now a story that has been tightened up, where some new ideas were added, and where the end has been changed and re-written. I believe that it is better now - what do you think? Any chance to review your avaliation?