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After receiving heads-ups from numerous readers pointing out typos and other errors in In The Navy, and having a few evenings for myself, I went over the first 15 chapters to give them another polish. ITN was the first story I posted here and the kind reception it received was a main reason for me to continue.
This being said, it also showed strongly that I am not a native English speaker. So, for the time being, I revised the 15 chapters of Book 1, split three of them into separate chapters, and reposted the same storyline in 18 chapters. I also adapted and amended small parts of the storyline to reflect the research I have done since first dreaming up this tale. You, the reader, will find one supporting character playing a lesser and less positive role. This mostly due to the fact that he must have been a less than stellar officer, contrary to my original perception. I also eliminated some of the over-the-top sex scenes, making the sex purely vanilla and also, I hope, more realistic.
If you decide to have a look, drop me a note if possible to let me know what you think of the revision.
I am already working on Book 2 and hope to post a revision later this month.

Sorry, but Chapter 28 will be posted on Monday. I could not make it today.

Just a short note to thank the readers who gave me feedback on SRK, especially those who detected factual errors. I try to work in the corrections as soon as possible. Even as an old fart, I still try to learn!
Monday will see a drastic change to Danny's life. More at eleven!

I am switching from thrice weekly to every other day, so you guys will have Chapter 7 of Suddenly Rich Kid as your Easter Egg from me. It is in the queue and should be posted early today (early for you in Canada and the USA; here it is 11 a.m. already :o).Thanks for your interest and the great feedback!

It only took me five years to get this story (mostly) done, but here it is. Today I posted the first three chapters of Suddenly Rich Kid. More are to come starting Sunday night. I am planning to post 3 chapters per week. There was no editor involved. I cleaned it up to my best abilities, but I haven't the time right now to go through external editing, corrections, revisions and all that stuff. So bear with me and my story. I also thought that in these crazy times, you'll want something to read and not something for your English Literature seminar :o)

Enjoy!
Note added: Old Rotorhead offered his help, cleaning up the text and hopefully eliminating the remainder of typos and errors. The revised first three chapters are now online; Chapter 4 was edited before posting.