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Happy Almost New Years! I have reposted a ton/tonne of chapters in Book 3: After the Energists the past couple of days. I have had some time to re-edit several chapters, and now have to Chapter 41 reworked to make them a little more readable for you.
Again - Happy New Years. Stay safe, everyone!
Mike (AL-Canadian)
Hey folks - I had some time off and did a reread and edit on my Book 3 - After the Energists: Rebooted High School story. I reposted the 1st 9 chapters of this 60 chapter book.
I tried to take some general comments for you, and from my new editor, and hopefully made it more 'readable' for you. I'll work on the next few chapters when I get a chunk of time.
Have a great holiday season!!
Mike (AL-Canadian)
Hey folks - I am submitting the final chapter of Book 4 - Start of the 11th Grade.
I have Book 5 (NIS Week for Mike & ??) completed but will probably wait until next Monday to submit the first chapter. For those of you who are upset with the Naked in School slant, please give the first chapter of Book 5 'a-go'. Also, there are two chapters which aren't taking place in the "SCHOOL" -> Halloween party at Sammy's house/pool and the final chapter of the week -> Halloween Dance on Friday night with a major event after wards!
As usual, comments, criticisms are always welcome. Please vote on the merits of the story - not because it is a lead into the NIS week.
Thanks and I appreciate you reading my story!
Mike (AL-Canadian)
Hey folks - I just submitted the next chapter (4) in this story. The first third covers the 'Naked-in-School' rules that will be used in the next book (Book5) of this story.
Some of you have let me know you aren't happy with the upcoming NIS path. As I've replied to your comments -> give these rules a look and then decide if you're opposed. I've made some modifications the NIS program, based on my view of it for the first time.
Additionally, Paul and Cathy make a return appearance in this and the next couple of chapters.
Mike (AL-Canadian)
Good morning folks - I've posted the 3rd chapter of Book 4. While I'm pretty happy to have ratings around the '8' mark, I would love to hear from the people who have scored the first couple of chapters fairly low.
I can't make things better without feedback. The 'atta-boys' are always appreciated but hearing about ways to improve a story are super important.
Thanks - Mike (AL-Canadian)
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