Ryan801army: Blog

My thanks for the feedback I've received so far. It may be long overdue, but chapter 17 has been submitted to the queue for posting. More still to come

First, I have to apologize this is even a question. I should have had the story complete long ago, but...life happens. But I'd like input if there is anyone interested in my finishing the story. Also open to constructive criticism as well.

Ryan

First off I would just like to thank those who have provided input on my story. The vast majority of it has been good which is fantastic as a first time author. That being said I've obviously noticed how life causes me to have gaps in my ability to continue the story. As someone who also reads stories here I know that same thing bothers me, getting into a story and then having to wait long periods for the next update. So what I am going to do is continue writing but not post additional chapters until I either have numerous chapters or have completed the story altogether. Hopefully this will be a better outcome for you the reader and also a reassurance that the story will be finished. Thank you for your patience and I hope you will enjoy what is still to come.
Ryan

I was asked by one of my readers if I would like any input/corrections. The answer to that is a definite yes. I have just resubmitted chapter 5 after a correction where I crossed names of characters up. I'm not perfect and am definitely not an English major (or ever was, for that matter). I'm going to make mistakes, I know this. I don't get offended if they are pointed out. In fact, I appreciate it since it allows me to go back and fix them so that future readers don't see the same problem.

As with everyone, I'm obviously not perfect. Had a typo pointed out to me that I'd missed in not just my initial posting but my follow up edit as well. Sounds like I may need to do more of my editing when it's not before bed time. I fixed the error (chapter 4) and have resubmitted that chapter. I do apologize for any of my errors like that, but hopefully they won't distract too much from the enjoyment you get from the story as a whole.