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Proofreader/editor

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I've posted in the editor request section but figure I'll try here as well. It's been pointed out that I have a fair number of errors in my story. If anyone would like to help proof the last few chapters of my current story as well as my next story I would greatly appreciate it.

Ryann

Chapter 22

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Chapter 22 has now been posted to the queue.

Chapter 22

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Chapter 22 is probably about half way complete. I'd like to think I can have it posted during the weekend. Posting pace for these last few chapters should be much faster. My next story I won't start posting until I have it mostly written I think. I'm still looking for an editor if anyone would like to volunteer time to help polish my story.

Chapter 21

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Chapter 21 has been submitted to the queue. I'd hoped to get two chapters posted this go around. Unfortunately this chapter took a lot out of me posting as I'm sure you'll understand when you read it. Obviously more is yet to come. Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated, for those who have provided it so far. I've got an editor request submitted, so with a little luck I'll get more eyes to help look things over and improve things soon. I try to do a good job with my writing, but I know I have my errors that slip through the cracks.

Chap 20...actually posted this time

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My apologies, but evidently when I had submitted 20 to the queue it didn't go thru. I have now corrected that and will be continuing with the story. There will be jumps forward a little to move the story. It will probably be able to be completed within about five chapters I would think. My apologies to those I've kept waiting. For any new fans - welcome. Criticism is always welcome

 

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