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Ok, It looks like I have some inconsistencies in Chapter two. I said Aiko had a black centurion card when shopping for funeral dresses. That was before I researched the card. Aiko doesn't actually spend enough to qualify for the invite to be a member, so I said in Chapter 4 I think that she only has a platinum card. I will rectify that and repost. I still have to repost the prologue , which I haven't done yet.
This story is averaging 1300+ downloads a week and not a single feedback.
Looks like I will be reposting SES prologue. I was looking through the prologue to verify some information when I noticed that I had some inconsistencies in the storyline. I liked the changes I made in chapter one so I rewrote those parts of the prologue to match. I will read through one more time before I repost.
Working on chapter 2 now. hope to have it posted sometime this week.
I know it's been a log time since I posted anything, but I just haven't been inspired. For the last few months I have been having dreams about this story and thought I would finally put it to paper. I have only written the prologue giving a bit of setup. The prologue and first chapter (at least) will be about Aiko Stevens. The entire story is told from her point of view.
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