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Pony World

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I recently posted Pony World and while Lazeez posted it he changed the MC's age from 13 to 14. By doing that he broke every other reference to ages. I had to find his changes and update everything else. I am pretty sure I found them all. Let me know if you guys see one I missed so I can fix it.

I'll never understand why people are so hung up about the nudity of minors. Nudity is NOT synonymous with sex. Nudity in and of itself is just not wearing clothes. After a while a person forgets they are naked, it becomes as natural as wearing clothing.

I am not harping on Lazeez or the moderators of other sites, they are just doing what they have to, to protect their sites and obey the laws of their countries. It's social conditioning at its finest, right?

After millennia of preaching body shaming by the church, I wonder how interesting life would be if laws were passed suddenly making most countries clothing optional, even for children. How much money families would save not having to buy clothes for kids that will outgrow them in six months?

End rant.

The Job Offer

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I am posting a revised version of The Job Offer. There is no reason to re-read the story (unless you want to) as nothing in it has changed. What I did was make the letter sent to Emily an image to retain the original font which SOL removed from the original post. The letter was supposed to appear handwritten but SOL changed the font and formatting. So I used the snipping tool to copy the text and turn it into a jpeg image. I tried embedding the font but it made it too large to post and no one accepts embedding. I hope this works. If so, I will use this method for such things as phone texts and handwritten letters, and other forms of fonts and formatting that are currently unsupported by the sites. I guess you could say this is a loophole.

A Friend's Betrayal

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I just posted my new story and I already have to repost it to fix something. I had the note inside the invitation in a table to make it look handwritten but it didn't convert to SOL. It was removed from the story So I have to remove the table and try something else.

CC975692

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For those of you who liked this story, you will be happy to know that I have cleaned up the first three chapters (I had way more errors than I thought) and added to them. Chapter three has been expanded some. The part between the impact and the landing on Earth has been completely rewritten. I decided I didn't like the way I had it originally. I have started Chapter 4 as promised, just not WHEN I promised it. The virus that "killed" Alena in chapter three is explained in chapter four. I am leaving Four open for a five but I make no promises of if or when. I will keep working on chapter four and post them all at once.

Saving a Relic (rewrite)

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After doing a bit of research (Googling) I learned the World Naked Bike Ride (WNBR) is a real event. I will not be adding anything to the bike ride event I will be expanding the event in the pub (the after-party).

The naked run in San Fransisco is also real. While it is not technically legal the police allow nudity during the run. All runners must get dressed immediately after completing the race or risk being arrested. I added a footnote about the race.

I couldn't think of anything else to improve the story so this will be my last repost, unless someone points out something to make it worth fixing.

 

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