Megansdad: Blog

It seems the troll who voted first on Part 1 did get to part 2 in time. It received better votes than part one. So it appears my followers like the character and the path I took it. Let me know if I should write a part 3. In each email tell me what you like about the story and what you'd like to see in part 3.

Just submitted episode 2. I don't know if there will be an epidsode 3 but it's not out of the question.

Before I get into my rant I wanted to make a special shout out to Purplecat and all of those who pointed out how much I suck at editing my own work. Purplecat I still say pet is correct. I still have my dictionary from 1981 when I was a freshman in High School. Merriam-webster online says petted is correct, but then it also say pet as a transitive verb means to take offense to sulk. Even if it was a diminutive form of petulant I still don't see that definition. In my book petulant mean to be an ass or a jackass. not pet. Anyway that's the end of my rant. Thank you guys again for the help. I'm going to post this one last time and leave it. I will be removing the comments and voting as well.

Less that 5 min and my story has 169 dnlds. Has a 6.9 score already. thank you for a nice score. For those of you who have read it already I have corrected some errors, inserted a missing paragraph, and differentiated between human and alien speech. Tavi uses contractions and the alien doesn't.

I may give the creature a name in a future chapter but I haven't decided. I am working on the next story and will post it when it is complete, hopefully I'll remember to edit 'before' I post it.

I have had such a wide variety of scores that I thought I'd turn on comments and see just what readers thought. I have received five votes of 10, unfortunately the vote of a 1 was the first, that I am considering rewriting and making it into a bigger story. Tell me what you think.