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So I passed a story to a compatriot here and he kindly gave me some very good pointers.
Thus what is the problem?
I feel like the story struggles to even be two dimensional.
Maybe I'm too self-crirical? IDK? But I'm definitely having morecthan second thoughts about letting another badly constructed abd finished story out there.
Then there are my five or six horrifyingly flat, not frightening attempts to write a horror story.
How can wordsvseem compelling in my mind, but fall flat when I write them down?
I'm really trying to think of what would be a reasonable goal in overcoming at least one of my paranoias... Because, as I've often stated here, I dont have just one noid I have vast herds of noid. So, I'm doing my best to have what I will consider a complete short novel (60,000 words approximately) and put it on book appy and premium here...
Bleah! I had to wait 'til I was where I could access my lappy to edit this, because my phone loves to autocorrect everything I write... And if I don't watch carefully I can end up posting, or publishing outright nonsense.
To ask for a prereader or two for a possible Halloween contest story?
I don't understand patron. Not that I am nearly consistent enough in my output to have subscribers.
I don't trust PayPal. Or I suppose any other money transfer company. All of this (not counting the fact that I don't write regularly) makes working online pretty much a no go.
They don't have to be out to get you if your paranoia prevents you from moving... I know. Yet remain fixed in place.
One issue seems to be that I may need to buy a new mouse as I have one that is not tracking and one that is not registering the button clicks.....
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