I recieved a lot of criticism (justified) for the way the story ended. I had several possible endings in mind, but couldn't make up my mind as to which way to go so I posted the story as it was. I finally made up my mind so here is my ending to the story. If you are unhappy with it you have my permission to write your own ending.
Drone strikes kill too many innocents. In search of a more subtle weapon, the CIA creates a robotic device to capture females, pin them down, and rape them. But the robot that does the deed is an avatar for men far away who experience it almost as if they were there themselves.
Same as Night Stalker. I just tried to rewrite it to see if anybody likes it any better. Middle aged wife is home by herself on a hot summer night. A prowler has been watching her and decides tonight is the night. How does she handle it with children in the next room?
He thought it was just a formality, being viewed by her stepmother - he was told she'd need her permission to marry her, and he did what he was told as it was. Already a slave to his wife-to-be, his vision of a homely older woman soon evaporates - along with what little liberty he had left.