Chapter 1

Edited by Sandy

Susan was on top of the world. She moved to Pennsylvania to attend college. It was a move she was unsure about, being that her family was all on the west coast, but it was working out better than she had hoped. Susan was a surfer girl from southern California and she never thought she could be happy this far from a beach. Her near perfect body still sported a dark, rich tan, that with her long blonde hair and slightly larger than average breasts, ensured that she stood out from the locals and most of the out-of-state students.

Another reason that Susan was riding high on life was Jeremy. He was a local boy taking a few courses to ensure that his farming family stayed current on all the new advances in agriculture. Susan and Jeremy had been going steady for about four months. She thought he was so cute with his down home manners and unprepossessing ways. The truth is that he was smitten with her and was about to pop the question, but still had his doubts.

Susan waited outside her dorm for Jeremy to pick her up in his late model pick-up truck. She was outside because she lived in a women-only dorm and male visitors were not allowed into the building. Being from a much more liberal atmosphere, she thought this was ridiculous, but grudgingly followed the rules.

Jeremy pulled up and hopped out of the truck, running around to open the door for her. Susan was very taken with his old world attitude and customs. After a tasty restaurant dinner, Jeremy stopped on a pull out on the side of the road. Susan was puzzled, but had faith in her well-mannered farm boy. "Susan, I know we've only known each other a few months and you haven't met my family, but would you marry me?" Susan whooped in surprise and joy, her eyes fixed on the antique engagement ring held out to her in Jeremy's shaking hand.

"Yes, I will Jeremy." Susan whispered, holding out her left hand so that he could put the ring on her finger. Then she hugged him close pressing her breasts tight against his chest. Jeremy blushed, not yet used to such intimacy. Susan felt his awkwardness and reassured him, "It's OK now Jeremy, we can be a lot more open to each other now that we are engaged."

Two weeks later Jeremy drove to Susan's dorm to pick her up. Tonight is going to be very important; it will be the first test of Susan's love for me. Jeremy pulled up outside the dorm and hopped out. He kissed Susan and opened the door for her. Jeremy was abnormally quiet during the drive to his parent's house for dinner. She tried to goad him into conversation, but Jeremy just responded in single syllables. As a result Susan was nervous when they pulled up outside his parent's house. When Jeremy opened her door to get out of the truck, he pulled her into a tight hug and whispered, "I love you very much. Please trust me and your heart tonight." Susan was confused, but nodded her accent.

Jeremy knocked on the door, which was opened by his mother. He hugged and kissed her on the lips. He passed his fiancée in to his mom. She hugged and also kissed Susan on the lips. His mom, Vivian, then welcomed her to the family and told her that if Susan ever needed to talk, that she was available. My, what a loving family. Susan thought.

Susan was next passed off to a large, burley man with an infectious smile, Jeremy's father, George. He picked her up in his arms and spun her around, holding her close. "Welcome daughter! I'm glad to see that you are as beautiful and precious as Jeremy told us." George kissed her on the lips, perhaps more passionately than a father-in-law should.

What happened next drove any other thoughts out of her mind. Susan was roughly grabbed out of George's grasp. "Whoopee, say hello to your new older brother, I'm Jess. His hands cupped her butt cheeks and he forced his tongue into her mouth as he kissed her hard. Susan was terrified as she started to struggle to get loose.

"It looks like she doesn't fancy you, brother Jess." A voice said as she was scooped out of Jess's arms and gently set upright of the floor. "I'm Justin, Jess' twin brother. In his race to be born first, he forgot to get proper manners." Justin performed a half bow holding on to her hand, which he kissed. "Nice to meet you, dear sister."

They next sat down to dinner, which Jeremy's mom served. Through the entire meal, Susan kept glancing at Jess, like she was afraid that he would leap over the table and ravish her. After dinner, Jeremy cleared the table while Vivian went over to Susan and whispered, "I think that now would be a good idea for that talk." Vivian led Susan into her sewing room.

Susan started to ask a question once they were away from the dining room, but Vivian silenced her with a finger to her lips. They both sat down and Vivian began to explain, "As you can see we are a very close family, this goes back generations to when there were no neighbors within a few days walk, maybe farther away. In those days, and is our custom, family was all. Because the wife would be living on the same farm, she had to be approved by all the family members."

"That brings us to today. I must apologize for Jess; he thinks that our customs give him free rein to pounce on his brother's fiancée. However, it would serve you well not to be hard on him. He still has the power to refuse to admit you to the family. Do you have any questions? I really want you to marry Jeremy and become part of our family."

Susan was momentarily speechless. "I see, sort of... What must I do, how must I act then, what would guarantee acceptance by the men of this family, assuming that I already have yours.

"Rest assured that you have my acceptance. You are a pretty girl, very brave and very much in love with Jeremy, as he is with you. An old great uncle of ours started a new tradition that, perhaps unfortunately, gives guaranteed acceptance if the future bride would have sex with her future father-in-law and future brothers."

"What... Why... you can't be serious... now? Vivian assured Susan that it would not happen tonight. That she would have plenty of time to talk to Jeremy and prepare. "That's something reassuring anyway."

"So you can freely leave from here tonight and never return. Shall we go back and visit with the men now?" Susan nodded with a thoughtful look on her pretty face. Once they had returned to the living room and Susan had sat next to Jeremy, she felt all of the men's eyes upon her. They were trying to see how she had taken the news. Susan kept a pleasant non-committal look on her face. She was not going to give them the satisfaction of reading her feelings that easily.

Susan was quiet on the drive back to her dorm. Jeremy didn't try to draw her out; he knew that they would talk when she was ready. He dropped her off and Susan told him that she would call him.

It was another two weeks before Susan called Jeremy. She told him to pick her up that Friday night. They would go out for dinner and conversation. Susan was waiting outside the dorm as usual when Jeremy pulled up. When he came over to open up her door, Susan greeted him with a kiss. That's a good sign, at least. Jeremy thought as he helped her into the truck.

They were mostly quiet as they ate dinner. Susan finally broke the silence during dessert. "You must love me a great deal, if you risked me meeting your family and finding out how things are done. I almost told you to go to hell, then I realized that I loved you a great deal too." She smiled and they kissed over the table. "I suppose that we will have to make arrangements next." Susan waited for Jeremy to speak.

"I'm so glad you don't hate me, Susan. Yes there are a few things to consider and decide upon. You already know what price my father and brothers will demand." Susan nodded, not trusting herself to speak of it. "My future is on the farm, would you be willing for us to have our own house on the farm? You can visit with my mother during the day, so you wouldn't be alone all day long. Will you do that for me?"

Susan toyed with her dessert for several moments before she answered. "Yes, I will do that for you because of my love for you. Can we have a big fireplace in our house and have lots of babies?"

Jeremy's face lit up with a big smile. He practically leapt over the table to take her in his arms. "I'm so happy Susan. I will try to be the best husband that I can. Let's go out dancing."

They had a wonderful time dancing. Over the next few days they decided on a summer wedding. Susan found out that she would have to sleep with the men at least a month before the wedding was announced. She prepared herself for the night of her time with her father-in-law and Jeremy's brothers. Susan had decided to get it over in one night. She figured that she could pay that price if she must to get Jeremy for life.

Jeremy drove Susan to his parent's house the night of her submission/approval. She decided to give her new relations a memorable night. Susan was wearing a short red dress, cut to the thigh on both sides. She had left her bra and panties at home. As she had slid into the truck, her dress opened at the waist shocking Jeremy. Susan's response has been, "Well, you do want them to want me in the family, don't you." Jeremy didn't say anything in response. Jeremy's mother was waiting outside the house. She gave Susan a hug and a kiss before taking Susan's place on the bench seat. Jeremy drove off with his mom, leaving Susan standing in front of the house in three inch strapless heels.

The door opened to reveal Jeremy's father and two brothers waiting for her. Both George and Justin wore bathrobes; Jess was just clad in his tented boxer shorts. Jess whistled as Susan walked into the house then shut and locked the door. Susan almost lost her resolve as she heard the lock click. Then she pirouetted on her heels, spinning her skirt up to reveal her naked pussy. "Like what you see?" Jeremy's dad just swallowed and pulled her by the hand into the bedroom.

"Just leave your heels on." George instructed as he shed his bathrobe and got on his back onto the bed. Susan watched George's fat dick twitch as she pulled her dress over her head. Susan crawled onto the bed wearing just her heels. She stopped for a few minutes with her head level with George's waist. He gasped as her long tongue licked the head of his cock. Susan inhaled his wide tool and sucked it hard. When she had sucked it for a few timeless moments, she released his now wet shaft. As she crawled up higher, George said, "The boys will see you in the living room when we're done."

Susan straddled George and lowered her wet folds onto his dick. George moaned as Susan slowly lowered her cunt onto his hard dick. She stopped half way down and wiggled her hips. George moaned some more, trying to thrust up so that his dick was buried all the way. Susan anticipated that and moved as he moved, keeping the same amount of George's fat cock buried within her. "Naughty Daddy, I'm on top, so let me drive! Susan accented her point by sliding an inch further down on his tool.

"Very well, what Daddy wants, he gets." Susan said as she slid the rest of the way down, feeling their public bones meet for the first time. As soon as they met, Susan started bouncing on George's hefty lap. They both started moaning as the bed squeaked out its protest. George grabbed Susan's tanned breasts and lowered her on to his mouth. He sucked on one hard nipple as his fingers twisted and pulled on the other. This was too much for Susan, she felt herself building up to her first orgasm. George was like a wild man, thrusting up as Susan thrust down and gnawing on her erect nipple.

George switched his mouth and hand to the other nipple. Freeing his sucking mouth from her tit for a moment, he told her. "You'll, find yourself in for a long, hard ride dearie. I fucked my wife just before you arrived and am ready for more. Right now, both boys are masturbating to make their time with you last longer." Susan just groaned, she was lost in her frenzied climb to Nirvana.

As George captured her loose nipple with his mouth, Susan screamed in orgasm. Her special juices flooded over George's hammering cock, almost causing his own orgasm. He gritted his teeth and stopped thrusting as he fought against cumming. Unfortunately for Susan his teeth were clenched around one of her nipples, bringing her a sharp pain that intensified her orgasm and George a taste of blood.

Susan came down from her pain boosted climax. She was almost in a state of shock, not believing what had just happened. George slowed his pace, just fucking Susan's limp body until she recovered and opened her pretty mouth to mumble through some indignant remarks about his parents and upbringing. Seeing that she was responsive, George speeded up and resumed his sexual pounding. He released her torn nipple and said, "Sorry about that, I didn't mean to hurt you, but I couldn't cum just then, it was too soon, you see." George kept up his assault on her sopping cunt as he spoke. Susan soon joined him in thrusting as she felt her second orgasm approaching.

George was pinching Susan's uninjured nipple and she was squeezing his nut sack as they erupted together into orgasm. George keep stroking until his limp dick slipped from her well-fucked hole. "You can use the bathroom to clean-up; Viv left you a douche just for that purpose." Susan staggered naked, but for her high heels into the bathroom. She went potty, douched and cleaned up. Walking a bit more easily back into the bedroom, Susan reached for her dress. "You won't need that for the boys. They are more easily impressed and you don't want to make them wait."

Susan slinked out of the bedroom, leaving the door open for George's viewing pleasure. Her tits hung proudly on her tanned frame, her nipples still erect. Susan could see Justin sitting on the couch, but where was Jess? Her question was answered a second later when he grabbed her from behind. His meaty paws clamped onto her tits and squeezed. Susan cried out in pain as her torn nipple reopened and started to bleed on Jess' hand. When Susan screamed, Jess let go of her like she was on fire. Justin came around the couch in a dead run. He took one look at Susan's bleeding nipple and quickly went to the medicine chest. Jess saw her blood on his hand and led her to the couch. He quickly whipped of his white boxer shorts and stopped the flow of blood. It just gets stranger, now a naked man is holding his boxers to my nipple that's bleeding after his father bit it while fucking me. Susan extemporized.

Susan closed her eyes as Jess saw to her on the couch. Justin returned from the medicine cabinet with a bottle. Jess opened his eyes wide as her saw what Justin had brought. "Are you sure you want to use that. I know mom used it a lot when we were growing up, you know scrapes and cuts.

"Let me tell you brother. Susan is a real find; I want to do what is best for her. Did you know that a human bite, that breaks the skin, is more infectious by a lot than say, a dog's bite. So we need to make sure that the cut is protected from infection. The best thing I know for that is mercurochrome.

At the sound of the word 'mercurochrome', Susan's eyes popped open. By then it was too late, Susan felt a horrible burning on and in her left nipple and uttered a blood curdling scream! Jeff held her tight to keep her from moving as Justin swabbed the mercurochrome over her left tit. "This will be a good test." Jess said. Susan heard what he said, but was too racked with pain to decipher it.

Justin screwed the bush/cap back on the mercurochrome bottle and set it aside. "What Jess meant was that if you have to do something in an emergency while we men are busy else where, like delivering a calf by yourself. So, if you can make the both us happy while being under such duress, you could handle anything."

The pain had turned into a dull ache and Susan finally understood what they meant. She realized that she still had to make good with these two now, regardless of circumstances. She smiled with wantonness and pulled Justin down onto the couch. "I forgive you naughty boy and thank you for your help. Are you first or is it Jess?"

Jess grinned as he got off the couch and pulled a tube out of a drawer. "Actually both of us, I'm gonna be entering your dark hole, so to speak. That's why the lube. You're not telling me that I'm getting a virgin ass?" From Susan's blush, both men knew what the answer was.

Susan decided to make the best of it and not show that she was embarrassed. She pulled Jeremy's robe loose exposing his long, hard cock. Susan kissed Justin, surprising him by slipping him the tongue. She broke off the kiss, gave a wicked smile to Justin and engulfed his hard cock with her mouth. I'm too dry now. I'd better get his cock good and slicked up. As she sucked and tongued Justin's long, stiff dick, she felt Jess squirt gelled lube up her tight asshole. Jess is not as long, but is a bit wider than Justin. I'd better tell him to take it easy.

Justin's cock was nice and slippery, so Susan let it slip out of her mouth and she straightened her torso. She maneuvered her feet and legs on either side of Justin and inched forward taking his cock into her hot pussy, little by little. Justin was moaning as Susan's cunt swallowed his dick. When he finally bottomed out, she pushed on his chest and rode him down until his back was flat on the couch. Jess saw her cute, little rosebud wink at him. He put some lube on his ready rod.

Jess took his two longest fingers into his mouth getting them wet. He wiggled one of his fingers into her tight bung-hole. Susan was clenching and unclenching her cunt muscles around Justin's shaft to keep him excited. Justin was waiting until his brother was up her virgin butt before getting to some serious fucking. Susan was getting wetter and moaned as Jess stretched her tight back hole with his farm-hardened finger. A second finger joined the first and she groaned as she was filled like never before, part of her moan was knowing that it would soon be fuller.