This is my first try at publishing a story. This is something I wrote for a penpal by request. It is brutal and quick to the point. It’s a little out of my wheelhouse, so critiques are appreciated.

Sally felt the collar tighten around her neck as someone was pulling her through a doorway. She knew her father had been holding the leash before she was blindfolded. It could be anyone now.

The men in the room were her relatives ... her brothers, father, uncles, and cousins. She thought there was at least a dozen. Most of them were playing cards or shooting pool. Their voices had been loud and boisterous as she entered the room, but had stopped as she was pushed onto her knees beside the couch.

She could smell the cigars and alcohol. She wished she could drink some whiskey. Anything to wash the taste of her father’s cum from her mouth. He had made her suck his cock before the evening festivities began.

Her leash was jerked again, and she knew to open her mouth. Another salty cock head was pushed between her lips. The cock was long, and quickly pushed past her tonsils. Tears formed in Sally’s blindfolded eyes as her throat was brutalized by the unknown cock. Sally gasped for air as the cock was pulled backed, only to have her throat filled again. Over and over the cock pushed through her lips. She felt the cock swell as the unknown cocksman signaled his impending orgasm. Salty jism hit the back of Sally’s mouth and she swallowed as quickly as she could. Sally milked the final drops from the cock as it was withdrawn from her lips. Sally leaned over and spit on the floor.

The slap was fast and hard across her face. A voice by her ear hissed “bitch, don’t you dare spit out my gift to you”. Sally sobbed out “I’m sorry, I won’t do it again”.

Sally felt a hand slide down her back, past her waist, and then between her legs. She froze as a fingertip touched her cunt. Oh god, her pussy was wet. Sally did not want to be excited, but her pussy was gushing liquid. The hand was covered in Sally’s juice. Sally shrieked as a thumb slipped up her ass and four fingers split her cunt. She cried in pain as she was upended and carried by her most tender parts.

Sally landed with a thump face down across the back of the couch. Her ankles were bound with straps. The restraints were pulled in opposite directions leaving her ass and pussy on full display.

A huge cock was laid against her pussy, sawing up and down. Sally shuddered as her clit was teased by the shaft sliding against it. A hard slap on her ass made her moan uncontrollably.

Another man sat on the couch by Sally’s head. With her arms tied behind her back, Sally could not move much. The second man lifted Sally’s head and slid his crotch directly under her face. The man lowered Sally’s mouth onto his cock. Sally tried to hold back, but the man pushed her head down further. The bulbous head was too large to pass her tonsils. The man pistoned his cock against the back of Sally’s mouth brutally, eventually pushing past her tonsils. His hot seed plastered the back of her throat. Her muffled pleas for mercy were unanswered.

Sally felt the man behind her slide his cock inside her pussy and roughly shove a thumb up her ass. She convulsed in pain and pleasure as her body went limp and passed out.

She didn’t know how long she had been out, but she was lying on a bed now. Her throat burned, and her mouth tasted of semen. Her pussy and ass felt well abused. Sally turned her head as she heard a door open. A voice yelled out “the little sluts awake” followed by the shuffling of feet. A hand pinched her nipple hard causing her to jerk. A second, then a third, and a fourth pinched her breasts. They pulled at her skin causing her to writhe in pain. A sharp slap across the face made her stop fighting. Sally was forced to ride a man’s cock while a second shoved his cock in her mouth. She was okay in this position until a third man forced his cock into her ass. She struggled with two cocks, much less three. Sally drifted in an out of consciousness as she was being pummeled. Sally felt cocks cum in her pussy and ass. She swallowed when they came in her mouth. She would awake to find different clocks in her holes, but there remained three cocks in her body continuously. Hours passed as Sally was pounded without stop.

Sally woke up about 5am to find herself in bed alone with all her restraints removed. She had been been given a sponge bath, and put in clean pajamas. Her hair had been brushed out and tied back. There was a glass of water with two aspirin on the side table. Her body was sore as she reached for the water. Sally’s throat stung as she swallowed the aspirin.

As she laid her head down to try to sleep she thought about the previous night. Sally felt she did pretty well for her 19th birthday. What would happen next year?