This is my first try at publishing a story. This is something I wrote for a penpal by request. It is brutal and quick to the point. It’s a little out of my wheelhouse, so critiques are appreciated.

Sally felt the collar tighten around her neck as someone was pulling her through a doorway. She knew her father had been holding the leash before she was blindfolded. It could be anyone now.

The men in the room were her relatives ... her brothers, father, uncles, and cousins. She thought there was at least a dozen. Most of them were playing cards or shooting pool. Their voices had been loud and boisterous as she entered the room, but had stopped as she was pushed onto her knees beside the couch.

She could smell the cigars and alcohol. She wished she could drink some whiskey. Anything to wash the taste of her father’s cum from her mouth. He had made her suck his cock before the evening festivities began.

Her leash was jerked again, and she knew to open her mouth. Another salty cock head was pushed between her lips. The cock was long, and quickly pushed past her tonsils. Tears formed in Sally’s blindfolded eyes as her throat was brutalized by the unknown cock. Sally gasped for air as the cock was pulled backed, only to have her throat filled again. Over and over the cock pushed through her lips. She felt the cock swell as the unknown cocksman signaled his impending orgasm. Salty jism hit the back of Sally’s mouth and she swallowed as quickly as she could. Sally milked the final drops from the cock as it was withdrawn from her lips. Sally leaned over and spit on the floor.