Chapter 16: Broken Rules

Steve Davies

I stared in awe at the door. I had edited it after it had been edited.

That should be impossible under the old rules.

I glanced down at my phone. At the increased abilities of my editing app. My heart pounded in my chest as this rush shot through me. I’d doubled my number edits for the day. After my new modifications, the door showed itself as unlocked from editing. It was like I had greater admin privileges or something. I could edit a lesser version of the app’s changes.

“Damn,” I said.

“You ... you...” Anael quivered before me. My angel panted, her body flushed. Her purple eyes gleamed as she stared at me. My cum dribbled down her thighs. “You’re amazing, my Lord.”

I’d edited my angel, too.

I had changed her loyalties to me as well as activating my phone’s abilities. She fell to her knees before me and engulfed my cock with her hungry mouth. She sucked her pussy juices off my dick while staring up at me with such love in the purple depths of her eyes. Her cheeks hollowed. Her tongue darted around my cock.

Pleasure surged through me. My balls tightened. I groaned, my heart pumping hot blood through me. She nursed with a feverish hunger. Her hands gripped my thighs. Her fingers clenched. She dug into me as she worshiped me hard.

I smiled at what I’d done. I’d won. I had Seth now. If I could edit the door, I could edit him. I had two more edits for the day. I smiled as I surged. My passion echoed through the small room that he’d sought to trap me in. I glanced at my time-paused wife. She had a mask of fear on her face.

She wasn’t in danger any longer.

Neither was my secretary, Imogene. She hugged herself tight. She looked confused and on the verge of panic, her brown eyes filling with tears. Seth wouldn’t hurt us. He wouldn’t get his hands on my eldest daughter.

Anael sucked hard. She bobbed her head. Her lips worked up and down my cock. I groaned as I stared down at her. All I had to do was edit the angel. It was incredible. My heart pumped hot blood through my body.

An idea popped into my head.

“What’s the name of Seth’s angel?” I asked.

Anael slid her mouth off my cock. “Jophiel, the Angel of Illumination.” A wicked smile crossed her lips. “I’m not supposed to tell you that, but ... You are amazing, my Lord.”

“I changed your loyalties,” I told her.

“Mmm, you don’t know what you’ve done,” she said. “It’s bold. I love it.” She licked the end of my cock, fluttering her tongue around the sensitive crown.

“What’s Jophiel’s real name?”

“Sophia,” she moaned. “Angel of Illumination and Wisdom.”

I smiled and closed the app.

Reality lurched back into motion. Anael vanished.

“Did you find something?” my wife asked, her voice strained. “Did you ... Did you fuck your angel? You’re naked. Hard. Your cock looks soaked in pussy.”

“Angel?” Imogene asked, her voice creaking. “What’s going on, Mr. Davies?” Then she squeaked in shock, “Where did your clothes go?”

“I’ve won,” I told my wife.

Her green eyes widened. She shuddered as her hands swayed before her. “Really?”

I nodded. I felt so different. Six edits a day. I could override any edits I’d done. I could fix any mistakes I’d made.

“You’ve truly won?” my wife asked. “We’re getting—”

My phone rang. I knew it would. Seth would be watching me on his app. I swiped the screen and brought it to my ear. “Hello, Seth.”

“You think you’ve won?” Seth asked, amusement in his voice. I pictured the young man in his bedroom, leaned back, relaxed and confident in his victory. “I would love to hear how you’ve done it. How you think you’re getting out of there.”

“You made a mistake,” I answered, all the tension gone from my voice. I rode the high of my orgasm and my triumph. My victory was assured. A hot tremble raced through me. Exhilaration pumped through my veins. It was so hard not to shout out in delight.

I fought against it, savoring my victory.

“A mistake?” Seth asked. He didn’t sound worried. “Please, Mr. Davies, enlighten me. I’ve spent all of my time thinking this through. Unlike you, I haven’t been rutting with every slut I can stick my dick in.”

“Pity,” I said. “You could have been having fun instead of this pointless fighting.”

“I can have fun after you’ve given up your edits,” he said. “So, what’s my mistake. I’m patient. It’s not like you’re going anywhere.”

“See, you didn’t make me use up all my edits before springing your trap,” I said. “That was my plan. To put obstacles in place that would force you to use your edits three times before I sprang my forces on you.”

“Didn’t need to,” Seth said. “There’s nothing in that room that you can edit to help you escape, and no force on earth that could get through the walls, floor, ceiling, or door. What, did you edit someone to come put a gun to my head and force me to give up my powers?”

“I’m not someone who likes violence or guns,” I said. “Besides, you have the protection aura. It wouldn’t work.”

“So, who did you edit?” Seth sounded so amused. “Tell me what I’ve overlooked.”

“Did you know you can edit your angel?” I asked.

Seth didn’t answer. His breathing grew heavier. I pictured him frozen. “What?”

“Of course, you have to figure out the password,” I said. “And I know your angel’s password.”

Before he could answer, I pulled my phone from my ear. I hung up and opened the editing app, freezing reality.

Anael appeared, still kneeling before me. She swallowed my cock, her purple eyes staring up at me as I searched for Jophiel. The view screen portion of the app switched over to Seth’s room. Jophiel was by him. Lurking around him. When I opened her profile, the nude image of her form appeared in that section of the app.

She was a black-haired woman with topaz eyes. She appeared to be Anael’s opposite in every way. Busty and curvy, but there was no sexuality about her. She didn’t ooze lust and delight. Her eyes were soft and full of wisdom. There was a beatific aura about her.

Jophiel (PASSWORD PROTECTED) Physical Mental Spiritual

I navigated through her menus, Spiritual Menu to Relationship Sub-Menu. Like with Anael, the Most High was the angel’s top relationship followed by Seth. My name wasn’t even on her list.

I inserted myself at the top of her list.

Steve Davies is Sophia’s master. The one she answers to above all others, even the Most High. She loves him and wants only the best for him.

I smiled as I typed that, loving the feel of Anael sucking on my dick. I backed out of the Relationship Sub-Menu. I pondered where my next change would lay in her menu. There had to be something in her profile that controlled who’d she given her app to. Sophia was a conduit like Anael.

I had to shift where that power flowed.

If I understood things, the moment Seth lost his powers, everything he did would be reset. This room, those strange anime girls, more. Where did those anime girls come from? I shook my head, he had created them somehow. But so many of them...

I had to know. I pulled out of Sophia menu. I wouldn’t lose any changes to Sophia to go investigate. I opened up the map and found one of the anime girls attacking city hall. It was someone named Amasaki Mio. She wasn’t edited, which I found absolutely fascinating. I navigated to her History Sub-Menu.

Drawn into existence by James Davies. Marveled at her new existence and is eager to please. Pleasured her first client, Stefan Roydon, and enjoyed herself immensely pleasing him. Returned to her paper to dream.

My son created her? I went to her Relationship Sub-Menu. The top one was Seth Davies.

I am loyal to Seth Davies even to death. I will do anything to make him happy above all others. He wants me to obey him. He wants me to be a good geisha and please all the customers of Dreamgirl Delights. He wants me to be happy and fun and flirty and sexy.

How did James create her? I switched over to my son. I went to his History Sub-Menu. I had to navigate through all his memories of today, including my inauguration, his date last night with his two girlfriends, including their various sexual encounters, then I reached a threesome he had with a girl with a strange name, Sakuraba Aoi. The memory before that was him creating her.

James finishes inking Sakuraba Aoi with his Coptic Marker and focuses on her coming to life. She appears before him eager to give him a reward.

“Coptic marker...” I muttered, Anael bobbing her mouth up and down my cock. She stared up at me as I unraveled this shyster.

I had to search for this marker. My son had lots of Coptic markers. He used them to create his art. But one of them was edited by Seth Meyers. I found it and read the profile. Seth had changed its properties, enchanting it to never run out of ink, to change the tip so it would draw at whatever line thickness my son needed, and to bring to life anything James drew so long as he willed it to exist. There was a caveat that any beings created this way would be loyal to Seth Parish.

I scrolled through my son’s history. He’d been drawing almost non-stop. When I was having fun, my son was being used by Seth. I thought my son was having fun, enjoying life outside of his bedroom for once. I let him have his space, and Seth used him.

I groaned when I read that my son thought he was a God because I created his two girlfriends.

Seth used that arrogance.

“That little bastard,” I growled.

I switched back to Jophiel. I had to finish my edits. I had to take apart Seth’s power and ensure my family wouldn’t be messed with. I had a hunch what I needed was found beneath the Spiritual Menu.

Spiritual Sexuality Faith Morality Social

I browsed down the list and smiled when I realized where it would be. I felt like an idiot since I had already been in that menu. I opened Relationship Sub-Menu and selected Seth Davies.

Sophia chose Seth Meyers to hold her power. Sophia sees Seth Meyers as being someone that she found intelligent and she could guide to make wise and studious decisions. He is within the sphere of Steve Davies and has the motivation to oppose him. Sophia believes he will make the best game for the entertainment of Heaven and the Most High. Sophia respects Seth Meyers. He often asks for her opinion. She enjoys guiding him in his plan to defeat Steve Davies.

I deleted her ever having given her power to Seth Davies. I backed up to my inserted relationship.

Sophia chose Steve Davies to hold her power despite Most High’s orders. Sophia sees giving Steve Davies the power the ultimate proof of her love and desire to serve him over all others.

I shuddered as I won. This would stop Seth from ever getting powers. Everything would change. His horde of anime girls would never have been created. I frowned at that. A shiver ran through me as the weight of that hit me. I swallowed. Did I have the right to erase them out of existence? Unless...

I could edit the pen. I could change it so that they were still drawn.

I had to do that first. I had to preserve those girls’ lives. Orihime and Ruri were real people. They might have come about artificially, but they had passion. Life. They were flesh and blood. They had their own personalities. It didn’t matter how they were created. How they came into being.

They deserved to live. Everyone deserved to have happiness and peace.

I switched over to the Coptic Marker.

Ciao Coptic Marker (Black) (Last Edited by Player 2) Physical Quality Spiritual Quality

I kept it all the same but changed its history so that I had edited it, and that James still drew all those girls. But not for Seth’s pleasure. He created them to be loyal to our family. To help us out. With my new power, things would change. I would need loyal people to help me run things. I didn’t have to edit these girls to make them dedicated to us. They would help run city hall. They would be eager to serve everyone in my family. They would take such joy in it.

They weren’t my ideal servants, but I was sure they would grow on me. They were all beautiful girls. Sam would love them. She was into a lot of the same things as my son. I smiled as I finished my editing, adding one more thing.

James doesn’t think he’s a god because he can create sentient beings but is thrilled that he has the power and will use it responsibly. He consulted with his father who encouraged him to create all these girls.

I set that edit in place. Next, I had to ensure that I would remain mayor. I had the edit to do it. I found the machine that had printed the ballets that Seth had edited to make me win. I edited in the same way and hit changes.

Finally, I returned to Jophiel. I went over everything, making sure nothing had reverted while I made my other changes. Everything was in place. I trembled as I Anael sucked at my cock. She stared up at me.

“Ready to win?” I asked her. She sucked and slurped. She bobbed her head faster, loving me. My balls tightened as I pressed the Compile button.

YES

or

NO

I hit YES and trembled as reality rippled from my phone.

The world wavered and grew blurry. It was a more powerful distortion then I had ever seen. It bent and contorted. It wavered. The brick walls around me, lit only by my phone’s blue screen, seemed to merge with another location. I couldn’t see anything clearly. I felt like I had moved. Like I was somewhere else. My wife’s position shifted. She appeared in a new pose and...

My wife was sitting on my desk in the mayor’s office, naked. Imogene was beside her, the two kissing, their faces coated in my cum. I shuddered, standing by them as reality returned to normal. There were other naked girls in the room. The anime girls looking ready to serve with bright smiles on their faces.

Anael still sucked my cock. She nursed with hunger on, my dick. I groaned, my phone vibrating heavenly in my hand. It grew warm like it was overworking. I shuddered, shaking my head, confused why we were here and...

Seth’s girls never attacked. We had no reason to be in the escape tunnel. I smiled. This reality would be so different than I remembered. Tonya would never have started dating Seth. Becky would never have the temptation to cheat on me while Sam would never have her faith in her love for me shaken.

Did Sam even know about my powers now?

Probably not. I should come clean with my family now.

My phone vibrated in my hand. I looked at the number of edits I had left. I should have none.

Instead, I had six.

Jophiel appeared before me. The busty angel’s eyes were wide. They were soft the shade of topazes. She trembled as she fell to her knees before me. She shook her head. It was clear she remembered the original timeline, that she knew this wasn’t the choice she had originally made. Like Anael and myself, she was immune from those effects.

“What have you done, my Lord?” Jophiel asked. “You’ve broken the rules.”

“Have I?” My balls tightened. Anael’s sucking was bringing me to the brink. “I just edited reality. I was given the power by the Most high. I used it.”

Anael sucked with such enthusiasm. I groaned and then erupted. My cum fired into her mouth. I threw back my head and groaned as the pleasure surged out of me. This amazing rapture slammed through my body.

I had won.

My cum boiled out of my cock. This powerful bliss in me pulsed with each eruption. I groaned as the pleasure pumped out of my dick. This amazing rapture set my blood on fire. Ecstasy slammed through my mind. My jizz spurted again and again.

“Anael!” I growled, staring into her purple eyes. “Thank you.”

She whimpered and sucked the cum out of my balls. My pleasure peaked as the last of my jizz spurted into her hungry mouth. She popped her mouth off of me and stared up at me with such glossy lust in her eyes.

“You’re welcome, my Lord.” She smiled. “I am glad you figured out my clues. I wanted you to win, but I had to play by the rules.”

“Now I make your rules,” I said. I glanced at Jophiel. “Right?”

“Of course, my Lord.” Her cheeks blushed. Her naked breasts shivered. “I ... I am not used to feeling sexual desire, my Lord, but...”

“He’s a horny perv,” said Anael. She bounded to her feet. “Mmm, so, you’ve unlocked your phone to the next level. You can edit larger entities now.”

“Larger entities?”

“Say ... a municipality,” she said. “An entire organization.”

“I can edit the entire city of Rainier?” I asked, shocked. The idea staggered me. I grabbed my phone and typed in Rainier, Washington and ... A map of the town appeared on the side of the screen, showing the city boundaries.

City of Rainier, King County, State of Washington, The United States of America Population Physical Quality Spiritual Quality

I stared at the profile in awe. I looked at it.

“This is insane,” I said, moving to my chair. It creaked beneath me as I flicked through the options. There were new menus I hadn’t seen. I tapped the Population Menu.

Population Demographics Fertility Rates Health Rate Gender Ratio

I stared at the options, the level of control I had. I could change the Demographics of the city, the Fertility Rate. I blinked at that. Gender Ratio.

“Damn,” I muttered, backing out of this menu and hitting the Physical Quality Menu.

Physical Quality Building Codes Transportation Infrastructure Property Environment Location

I blinked at it. Then I smiled when I saw some of the options. I hit the Environmental Sub-Menu.

Environment Air Quality Water Quality Land Quality

I loved it. I could make Rainier a perfect place. A paradise. This was amazing. I went back to the main menu and hit the Spiritual Quality Sub-Menu.

Spiritual Quality History Government Sexuality-Female Sexuality-Male Faith Morality Aura

There were so many new options. The sexuality of my citizens, their faith, their morality. There was even an Aura Menu.

“I can make this town into what I want,” I groaned. It was overwhelming. It was something I would have to think about carefully. “This is...”

“I know,” Anael said. “You have earned it. You have won the contest.”

“Yes, you have, my Lord,” Jophiel said, her nipples hard atop her large breasts. She swallowed. “I will advise you on the best options to make a happy society. But know that it takes six uses to edit a large object.”

“Yep,” Anael said. “Ooh, we could make this place into a city-wide orgy. Just imagine all the fun your citizens could have.”

“There is more to life than sex,” Jophiel said.

“Nothing that’s better,” Anael said. Her purple eyes gleamed.

“I have to think about this,” I said. I glanced at my wife locked in the kiss. “I have to talk to my wife.”

“Of course, my Lord,” Jophiel said. “I am at your disposal, lurking around you at all times. I will be here when you are ready.”

“Yep,” said Anael. She grinned. “Heaven must be in an uproar. Ooh, I love it. You are amazing, my Lord. I love you so much.”

“Yes, my heart is beating hard and fast,” Jophiel said. “It is a new sensation. Oh, my.” She fanned her flushing face.

I closed the app.