Untying the Knot: Ally's Story
Copyright© 2026 by FyreFoss88
Chapter 24: Jaded
Fiction Sex Story: Chapter 24: Jaded - A promiscuous young woman is committed to a controversial sex addiction clinic where she must contend with both the staff and patients (or should that be ‘inmates’?). Untying the Knot is an examination of erotica, submission, and the terrible things people do to each other when seeking meaning in their lives and in their actions; both at a personal and institutional level.
Caution: This Fiction Sex Story contains strong sexual content, including Ma/Fa Fa/Fa Mult Blackmail Coercion Consensual NonConsensual Reluctant Slavery Lesbian BiSexual Heterosexual Fiction Cheating Cuckold Sharing BDSM DomSub MaleDom FemaleDom Humiliation Light Bond Rough Sadistic Spanking Torture Gang Bang Group Sex Anal Sex Analingus Cream Pie Double Penetration Enema Exhibitionism Fisting Flatulence Massage Masturbation Oral Sex Petting Sex Toys Spitting Squirting Voyeurism Water Sports Public Sex Cat-Fighting Revenge Violence
That evening, I was trying to do yoga when the door buzzed and popped open. I stood. Two wardens came in, followed by a skinny little thing with a lip ring and a bee-hive of dreadlocks spun up onto her head. She looked like she’d fallen into one of those candy floss machines.
This is your new dorm-mate, the warden said.
Ally, I said, holding out my hand.
Jade, the girl said with a slow drawl.
We shook hands. She was pretty - as pretty as a hippy with rat tails for hair could be. She wore absolutely no makeup and had zero personal effects with her at all. She smelled of what seemed like a mix of bees wax and garlic. Makeup wasn’t allowed at Renew but now and then people showed up wearing it on the first day. Not this one. I had never met a woman like this before and I was immediately attracted to her. Maybe I truly would fuck anything. Maybe I was just broken.
I had taken Trix’s bunk. It felt important to hold on to it so I could remember what we had there. Jade took the top bunk and didn’t say a word. She crashed down on it and was silent. I figured it would be best to leave her acclimatize at her own pace. I had dived in head first - literally - and look where that had gotten me.
Some time passed. I was expecting lights out to come but the door buzzed again and cracked open. I launched to my feet. I had even left my shoes on. I had spent the whole day conjuring up scenarios of how I would defend myself but now the moment had come I had no fucking clue how I would proceed.
In walked Lena and two of her dyke bitches. I could only assume it was the same two from very early this morning.
Ally, Lena greeted.
She took a cursory glance at the woman on the top bunk.
Has this one tried to bring you to heel yet, Ally? Lena asked, pointing at the woman with dreadlocks.
What? I asked.
Well, there must have been a very good reason why you shut down the dorm transfer that I had taken the time to organize, and I was wondering if it was because you were planning on throwing yourself at the next pretty thing that as much as gave you a smile. No?
I don’t want any of this, I said, ignoring her, I never asked Trix to attack you. You’ve had your revenge, which is fair. I cannot deny you that. But now she is in the hospital, I ask you, please leave me out of this.
Lena’s dykes laughed, but the woman herself only smiled.