Starting Over: Nerites
Copyright© 2025 by Quantum Mechanic
Chapter 3: Redirection
Science Fiction Sex Story: Chapter 3: Redirection - Cheyenne is a plains world dedicated to production of livestock for sale to other human-occupied planets. Jean has a great job there, but he's offered a better job on a watery planet, and an opportunity to develop his own homestead. In order to take the new job, he has to uproot and transplant his young family. It's not easy going, and once there, the troubles have just begun.
Caution: This Science Fiction Sex Story contains strong sexual content, including Ma/Fa Romantic Heterosexual Fiction Science Fiction Cheating Massage Oral Sex Pregnancy Slow
As soon as they were out of sight of Jean’s family, however, Hardy turned the boat to a new heading. Jean looked at Hardy in askance, and Hardy said “There’s someone you need to meet first, and he lives outside Clayton in this direction.” Jean shrugged and made himself comfortable for the ride.
After about twenty minutes of high-speed travel, Hardy slowed down to a crawl, and began examining the shoreline of a nearby island very carefully. He apparently found what he was looking for, because he abruptly turned the boat to the left and headed for what appeared to Jean to be a solid wall of trees. As they approached, however, the wall developed a dimple, and eventually the dimple turned out to be the inlet to a channel that snaked its way deeper into the island. The channel twisted and turned so severely that the bordering trees kept visibility to less than a hundred meters.
After rounding several of the tight bends, a short dock appeared, leading to a ramshackle house. The house was built on pilings and stood out over the water.
Hardy hailed the house “Eli! Eli, are you home? It’s Hardy, and I’m bringing a friend!”
Jean heard a voice call back, but couldn’t make out the words. The boat continued to approach the dwelling, and he observed a wizened face peering from the doorway. The man in the door was shorter than average, and obviously older than either he or Hardy. He could, in fact, have been old enough to be Hardy’s father.
When they were close enough, the elderly man tossed them a line, and they made fast to the dock. Hardy began the introductions.
“Eli, this here is Jean Pasteur. He’s the newcomer who took over the empty parcel next to mine. He’s a good fellow and has a great family, and I thought I’d introduce him to the neighborhood.”
“Glad to meet you young man, and welcome to the swamp” said Eli, looking him straight in the eye. “Eli Warner’s my name, and I’m kind of a fixture in these parts. I’ve lived in this house ever since my Dad kicked me out at the age of fifteen.”
Jean took the proffered hand, and said, “Thank you very much, sir. I’d like to take advantage of your experience, and I’d be grateful to hear everything you want to share about life in this area. I plan to make it my home from now on.”
Eli continued gazing at Jean unwaveringly, and said to Hardy “This is a very polite young man. Seems pretty smart, too.” Eli pushed a pair of rocking chairs toward the two, and Hardy grinned and nodded as they sat down. The men chatted, traded information and lies, and after a short while Eli’s wife appeared with a tray of drinks.
“All we have is tea and beer,” she said, “and Eli can’t have any beer for a few more days.” Eli’s face went sour at that remark, but he felt the need to explain.
“My doctor has me on a restricted diet,” he said. “I can only have two beers a week, and not on the same day. Says it messes up my blood, somehow. I don’t believe it though. I think he just thinks that anything I enjoy as much as I do a cold beer, can’t possibly be good for me.”
The men visited for nearly an hour before Hardy said, “Eli, I know you could talk ‘til the cows came home, if we had any cows, but I got things I need to do today. I’ll bring Jean back another day, or he can come back by himself sometime, but we need to go now.”
Reluctantly their host agreed to their departure, with an invitation and an admonishment to return soon. They shook hands all around, said their goodbyes to Eli and his wife, and left in the airboat.
When they were out of sight, and out of earshot, Jean turned to Hardy and said, “The Warners are nice people, and I really enjoyed our visit, but what was that all about? You didn’t do any business there that I could see.”
“I didn’t go there to do business,” Hardy replied, “I introduced you to Eli so you could do business.”
“What do you mean? Did I miss a cue or something? Was I supposed to make some kind of proposal to Eli?”
“No, you did exactly what you were supposed to do. Simply meet the man, be yourself, and enjoy the visit.”
Jean still didn’t exactly understand how that was supposed enable him to do business with anyone, anywhere, but he reluctantly settled down and went along for the ride.
Hardy, in order to mollify him somewhat, said “it’ll become clearer in just a little while. I’m taking you into town now, and there’s where you’ll do business.”
Not long afterward, they approached the town dock, and caught a line tossed by one of the ragged teen-aged boys hanging around there. As they climbed out of the boat, Hardy fished a worn five-credit note out of his pocket, and showed it to the boy, saying “look after my boat while I’m in town, and this is yours when I get back.” The boy nodded vigorously, and took up a defensive position near the boat.
The two men sauntered down the dock toward town. When they reached what passed for the main street, Hardy turned to the right and said “The business district is this way,” then he led Jean toward a small cluster of buildings. Actually, the only buildings on the island.
“This here is the bank” he said, pointing to a nearby, low concrete structure. “It’s a branch of the Bank of Nerites, and you need to talk to the fellow in charge, in order to arrange a loan to buy a houseboat. His name is Ben. I’ve got to go to the general store and order some supplies, so you’re on your own.”
“But why would he make a loan to a total stranger?” Jean frowned.
“Trust me” Hardy said, “Besides, what have you got to lose, except the time?”
Giving up, Jean veered off and headed for the bank.
“I’ll be back soon,” Hardy yelled, as he strode purposefully toward the general store.
Jean entered the building, and as the door closed behind him, he was met by a blast of cool air. This was the first air-conditioned building he had been in since leaving work several days ago. He walked into the small lobby area and saw a small empty desk near the far wall, and two teller stations to his left. One of the teller stations was unmanned, but a pretty, young blonde attended the other.
Jean approached the teller and said, “I was told I need to see someone named Ben, to arrange a loan.”
The teller smiled and pointed to a window set in the opposite wall, saying “He’s with another customer right now, but I’m sure he’ll be free in a moment.”
Jean looked at the window, and saw that there was a small office on the other side of the glass. In the office, there was another desk, and behind the desk a man who looked vaguely familiar, perhaps a little older than Hardy, and not in as good condition. A young couple sat across the desk from the man, obviously talking earnestly to him. He nodded and listened to them intently, occasionally interrupting to say something. None of the sounds of this exchange were audible to Jean.
“Why don’t you make yourself comfortable?” suggested the teller, pointing to a divan near the window. “Would you like some coffee?”
“Ah ... no thank you,” Jean stammered, “no coffee, that is. I will take a seat, however.” He then sat on the divan and tried not to appear too interested in the trio on the other side of the window.
After a short wait, the young couple inside stood, shook hands with the older man, and made their exit from the office. The man behind the desk came out with them and said goodbye, then he turned to Jean and asked, “May I help you?”
Jean rose from his seat, and extending his hand, introduced himself. “I’m Jean Pasteur” he said, “and I just moved into the neighborhood.”
The banker accepted the handshake and said “I’m Ben Warner, and depending on who I’m trying to impress, I’m either the VP of this bank branch, or its chief loan officer.”
“Well it’s the latter title that brings me here today,” Jean responded. “I’d like to arrange a loan.” Then it hit him why Ben looked familiar. “Warner,” he repeated,” are you any relation to Eli Warner?”
“Well, yes,” Ben replied carefully, “He’s my father. Where do you know him from?”
“I just met him this morning,” said Jean, “Hardy Saxon and I stopped over at his place on our way to town. Had a real nice visit.”
“I see,” said Ben, nodding, “then you’ve been officially welcomed to the neighborhood. Why don’t you come into my office, and we’ll see if we can do business. Do you have an account with our bank?” he asked, sitting down behind the desk.
Settling into a chair, Jean replied “I have a draft account with the main branch in Poliniriton, but I haven’t opened one here. Do I need to?”
“Naw,” said Ben, “your account is already as good here as it is in Poliniriton. May I see your debit card?”
Handing it over, Jean waited while Ben scanned the account number into his workstation. “Ummmhmmm,” Ben murmured, “I see you don’t have a savings account with us. You might want to get one started, even if you don’t deposit very often.”
Jean nodded and waited some more. After reviewing a screen full of information returned by the bank’s central database, Ben looked up and gave Jean a stare that made him feel as if he were sitting on a scale. Ben arose and asked, “Mr. Pasteur, could wait here for just a moment?”
“Certainly, and please, call me Jean”
Ben disappeared through the door, and looking around, Jean saw him enter the unoccupied teller station. Once there, he accessed a communication console and it appeared that he became involved in a conversation with an unseen correspondent. Eventually, he broke the connection and returned to the office.
“Jean,” he said, “I’d like to find out more about what you have in mind. You don’t have a credit history here on Nerites, and we generally restrict our first-time loan customers to small consumer loans. On the other hand, I can see that your job definitely provides you with the ability to repay a substantial loan. So talk to me.”
“Well, it might help if you knew some of the history,” Jean allowed. “It all started like this...” and he launched into the tale of their move to Nerites, his acquisition of the land grant, and the reason for moving his family out of the city with so little up-front preparation.
Before he was finished, Ben was practically rolling on the floor with laughter. “And so you want a loan to build a house,” he sputtered merrily.
“Not exactly,” Jean replied. “I’d like a loan to buy a houseboat, for now. Maybe in a while I’ll build the log house I really want.” Ben stopped laughing and looked at him.
“That’s actually something I can help you with,” he said seriously. “The Bank of Nerites doesn’t usually make building loans for individuals, but we do make loans for big-ticket consumer items. A houseboat would qualify. Have you picked one out? Are you looking at new or used?”
“Actually, I’ve only been thinking about it for a matter of a few hours. Hardy suggested it only this morning.”
Ben nodded, “Honestly, I think you should consider a used model. A new one depreciates about fifty percent in the first year of ownership. The price on a used boat being much lower, means that the amount of the required loan is lower as well, and more likely to be underwritten.” He scribbled a note and handed it to Jean. “See if you can get Hardy to take you around to these people. They’re only about an hour away from here, and they broker a lot of used boat sales. They might have something you could use. If you find something, come back tomorrow and let’s talk again.”
The men arose and shook hands, and Jean exited the bank. Hardy was waiting for him and asked, “How’d it go?”
“Pretty well, I guess, but I’m a little uneasy about it.”
“Why’s that?”
“Well, I learned that Ben is Eli Warner’s son. I fear Ben might feel I’m trying to use my new friendship with his father to take advantage of him.”
Hardy considered this, and responded, “You’ve got to learn something here, Jean. The most valuable currency in this backwoods economy is goodwill. You can’t do business here without it. My introducing you to Eli gave you the opportunity to develop some. You did a good job. All you’ve done with Ben just now is that you traded a little of that goodwill, and it has enabled you to develop a business relationship with him. Don’t forget, Ben’s trading a little goodwill, too. If he helps you out now, he’s going to make money, and you’ll probably come back the next time you need a loan.”
“It still feels like I’m using my friends,” said Jean.
Hardy turned and looked him in the eye. “Listen carefully, young man,” he said grimly. “I never use my friends, but I do make use of my friends. There’s a world of difference. Friends don’t mind helping friends, and you would do well to remember that.” He turned and led the way back to the boat. Arriving there, he paid off his under-aged watchman, and as he boarded, he asked, “What did Ben say?”
Jean found the note, and handed it to Hardy. “He said I should ask you to take me to see these folks.”
Hardy read the note and nodded. “I know these guys. They’ll probably have something you can use, and they’re not known for shady dealing. You want to go right now?”
“I’d rather have Beth along, but I guess we can go look if it’s OK with you. I can always take her back later if I find something interesting.”
“Even as it is said, so it shall be done,” intoned Hardy, as the engine roared to life, and they sped away.
Jean watched carefully as Hardy negotiated the channels between the islands, and eventually entered a mooring field where a number of obviously unoccupied houseboats were secured. As they puttered around the boats, a small launch left a nearby dock and came out to meet them. The lone occupant of the launch hailed them, “Hi there, name’s Smitty. What can I help you with?”
Jean stood ready and Smitty tossed him a line, then they pulled the boats together to parley. “I’m looking for something to live in while I build a house,” Jean declared. “I’d be particularly interested in something with two staterooms, fore and aft, and an open floor plan, including the galley, amidships. Tankage amidships too. Small bridge forward, and one on an upper deck. I don’t plan to move around a lot, and don’t need to plane when I do. You got anything like that?”
Smitty paused for a moment, rubbing his chin. “I think I got two models that could meet your need.” Turning to Hardy and pointing to a nearby boat, he growled “Think you can get us over next to that without breaking anything?”
Hardy snorted, and replied “Piece of cake.” and he maneuvered the airboat neatly alongside the target. They tied up to the houseboat, and all went aboard.
After looking around the boat, Jean was satisfied that Smitty had heard him correctly. The layout of the houseboat was exactly as he had requested, and while it and all of its appurtenances were obviously used, everything seemed to still be serviceable. It just seemed so small. As they toured the vessel, he voiced the obligatory criticisms of the condition of this feature or that piece of equipment, and finally asked Smitty the price.
“Twelve thousand.” Smitty stated firmly.
Jean nodded, and then asked, “What else you got?”
“Like I said, one other that might meet your spec. Lets get in my launch and go see it.”
Hardy interjected at this point “Smitty, I’ve got better things to do than spend my evening waiting for you to decide to bring us back to my airboat. I’ll just take us all, and your launch to the next one.” Obviously disappointed, Smitty nevertheless agreed, and soon the three were touring another houseboat.
The second vessel had a layout nearly identical to the first, but was even smaller. Jean knew even before he set foot on it that he would not be buying that one. The name of the game, however, was negotiation, so rather than give away all his cards, he again asked for a price.
“Ten thousand,” Smitty said. This time he was not quite as firm, and Jean smiled to himself. Both he and Smitty knew now knew that the asking prices were merely a starting point for negotiations. He had read Smitty correctly, and would be able to get a better price on the larger boat.
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