The Black Halloween Party Dress
Copyright© 2024 by Spacer X
Preface
Coming of Age Sex Story: Preface - Tommy Bryton is a handsome athlete enjoying his youth to the max
Caution: This Coming of Age Sex Story contains strong sexual content, including mt/ft mt/Fa Mult Teenagers Consensual Fiction Humor Cheating Incest Mother Son Group Sex Facial Oral Sex Petting Pregnancy Tit-Fucking Big Breasts
A note by Spacer X:
By chance, I stumbled across a story called “The Halloween Party Dress” by The Shadow Rising. It was very obscure, apparently only existing on a personal blog that was active for a few months and hasn’t been updated since 2005. I had lots of fun reading it, but I had lots of problems with it too. The formatting was all messed up, the spelling was bad, and the grammar was worse. For instance, dozens of sentences and paragraphs didn’t even have any ending punctuation. So I copied and pasted the whole thing into a word processor and started to correct it as I read, mostly so I could make sense of it.
As I went on, I started to have more fun with it, and I went from just fixing it to making additions. Soon, things kind of got out of hand, and I wound up making some drastic changes and adding entirely new scenes. The story I found was 25,000 words long, and by the time I was done with it, it grew to 100,000 words! So, although I don’t know The Shadow Rising and have found no way to contact him, this wound up as a story co-written by both of us. The vast majority of the ideas were his, and I mostly just fleshed things out quite a lot (although there are some pretty major changes in the second half). I’ve given it a slightly different title since it’s changed and grown so much.
I must admit I didn’t put much time or thought into the rewrite. I basically added 25,000 words in one massive day-long writing session while I was reading the original version for the very first time! Then I read it all over again in another big writing session, and added another 25,000 words, and then there was yet more added with a third and final pass. It’s not a particularly exceptional, profound, or unique story; it’s just a fun, incestuous, non-stop sex romp (once the action gets started, that is). I haven’t thoroughly honed it like I have to some of my totally original stories, but I hope my expansion will help rescue it from obscurity and allow a new group of people to discover it. Please read it in that spirit, and may you get a good kick out of it.
