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Author's Description:
No cheating wife, torture or hideous beasts; but if gorgeous girls, a friendly harem and relaxing venues are your pleasure, come join us. You may be able to easily predict some things, but not everything that will happen. Steve, Mary, Jennifer and Amanda start our story as the main characters. Will they still be so at stories end, not sure are you? Wait, I forgot about Sheila, Vicky and Angela.
Size: 163 KB (32,319 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Fiction, Harem, Polygamy/Polyamory, Safe Sex, Slow

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

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Wow! What a guy! He isn't interested in any help. But here goes.

Nautical terms ... you know port and starboard, aft and, well you get the drift. Lets talk about Nautical miles, knots, and nautical miles per hour. Have you ever read about boat speed? It is measured in nautical miles per hour, or simply KNOTS. Not knots per hour that is saying miles per hour per hour. Distance travelled [ see 44 knots ] Distance = 44 nautical miles. Knots is boat speed again.

Well I do not usually do a review of an unfinished story, been caught too many times in the past by stories just dumped after maybe mental cramps maybe. So this is a fun story about a loving grandson whos Granny dies and leaves her entire fortune to our hero, who amasses a wonderful harem quite rapidly to help him in his great sorrow at Granny's death. What a life, poor fellow. Well lets see what our G.B or Aussie Author has for us next, it is too good to drop.

OH, how do I think Jerrod is "foreign"? Trainers, thats how. Sneakers in the US and Canada. Next: We will pull his other leg. Enjoy this poor little rich boy tale, I am.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 3 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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