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Don takes his first vacation alone after his divorce to help clear his head. After a freak storm, he rescues a mysterious woman, who will change his life forever. But, she has secret that could either drive him away, or bring them closer.
Size: 71 KB (13,906 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Mystery, non-anthro, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Slow

Review by Paw Writer   [other reviews by Paw Writer]

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Don takes his first vacation alone after his divorce to help clear his head. After a freak storm, he rescues a beautiful unconscious nude woman, Possibly due to her injury she does not speak, but she does seem to somewhat understand. How he finds out what her secret is and handles it creates a beautiful love story

NymphWriter said she tried to keep the mystery of this woman as long as she could so I'm not going to reveal it either. Suffice it to say I figured it out fairly early, but I like this type of story.

The plot is very well done and you don't really have any questions at the end.

After a bit of re-editing, mistakes are almost non-existent.

As usual in a romance, the sex doesn't come until the end, but it was well done.

An unusual premise, but well handled and a good romance.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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