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Author's Description:
Throughout history, rich men have parlayed their wealth into reproductive success by way of polygamy, mistresses, or taking advantage of the servants. In the year 2031, the richest man in the world decides to use modern technology to translate his wealth into offspring on a scale commensurate with the extent of his riches.
Size: 24 KB (4,239 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Pregnancy

Review by richardshagrin   [other reviews by richardshagrin]

Reviewed:


This is an interesting concept but not much story. I think it is worth reading and recommend it to SOL readers. It is fairly short and won't cut down much on your other reading activity. I wonder why extremely wealthy men haven't done this.

Doing the numbers, the plot is a 5. A "D" in the highschool grading system. Poor, but still passing. You probably won't want to read this story because its plot is engaging. The Technical is an 8, an A. I didn't give it an A+ or a "it blows me away" 10 but it didn't see any issues worth raising. Appeal is also an 8, mostly because it is an interesting idea about what to do with all that money. I doubt most readers will agree with me about the appeal number. As a story when I first read it I gave it a 5. Its the concept that brings up the number.

The author has a number of other stories you might enjoy more.

Plot: 5 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7
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